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Debbie's Gift: An Erotic Story of Female Dominance

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I bought this book because it deals with a subject personally important to me: female dominance. I confess I have only browsed in it so far, looking for good parts. I haven't found them. Everyone has their own definition of "good parts" in a work of erotic fiction. I like depictions of female-male power exchange that are plausible, original, and well-written. I didn't find much to satisfy me so far. What I did find were sections that suffer from repetative, formula-styled writing along the lines of the green slave did such and such, then the gold one outdid him by doing such and such. I appreciate anyone for even writing about female dominance, but I'm not thrilled by this book. If I give it another try and change my opinion, I'll edit my review.

I agree with the previous reviewer. I bought this book expecting something edgy, something unique, something that was similar to my creative fantasies, and i didnt find that. People are way to willing to go with the flow...there wasn't enough emphasize on the female dominance - the interactions between the specific woman and man weren't really dwelled on...the submissive endured "torturous" activities that didn't see that torturous, or plausible, or erotic. I wish i would not have purchased it.