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interesting but poorly executed
on January 4, 2013
Creative ideas and "fun" throughout but with poor writing and terrible editing. The characters are flat, repetitive and all too alike to be believable. Use of English is poor with sloppy/lazy editing eg many words are spelled right but misused. One does not reign a horse, or sheer a bolt or ... well I could go on and on. The overuse and misuse of commas is just awful from beginning to end. Though this book reads somewhat like YF (youth fiction), its poor structure just contributes to the decline of the novel as a literary form.