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3.0 out of 5 stars
(3.5) "Do you want to hear something that will change your lives forever?", June 13, 2010
From reading the publishers reviews of this title, I expected Dismantled to be riveting. Although it is well-plotted for the most part and moves towards a "frightening" conclusion, McMahon asks a lot from her readers and expects a high degree of naiveté. Between the oddly-prescient nine-year-old Emma De Forge, Emma's invisible sidekick, Danner, and the four college students who style themselves "the Compassionate Dismantlers", complete with manifesto, there are lots of misdirections in the story. On the face of it, the Compassionate Dismantlers are college rebels who indulge in petty pranks and criminal behavior on behalf of their beliefs, gathering at a remote Vermont cabin, where tragedy strikes one harrowing night, leaving the group with a dark secret.
In the near-decade since the group disbanded, Emma's parents, Henry and Tess, find their marriage floundering, the past weighing like a stone on the present. Suddenly it all becomes real again in the form of a postcard, Henry and Tess convinced their rural property is haunted by the dead. Emma begins snooping into her father's hidden papers at the instigation of her goofy school friend, Mel, the girls convinced the key to bringing the couple together lies in awakening the past. Emma's other friend is invisible; Danner tells secrets to Emma, their conversations increasingly troubling as evidenced in Emma's erratic behavior. Danner comes to life in the form of a rag doll Emma makes from scraps. The farm is literally crawling with malevolent characters, real and imagined, including a private detective who has been hired to dig into the suspicious activities of the Compassionate Dismantlers years ago at the cabin in Vermont.
What was most difficult for me to imagine is a group of art students embracing the concept of Compassionate Dismantlers- clumsy at best, ridiculous at worst. The leader of the group, Suz, is basically a sociopath who dresses in silk tunics, leotards and combat boots and has a grating penchant for calling everyone "babycakes". I really wanted this book to be more exciting and less middle-school scaring each other with horror stories. And I wish Emma wasn't so weird, regardless of her OCD. This book is perfect for a YA audience. But for grown-ups with a taste for Dan Simmons, Dismantled doesn't make the grade. Luan Gaines/2010.
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7 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Not at all creepy and just overall disappointing..., July 24, 2010
I wanted to love Dismantled, I really did. I absolutely loved and adored Promise Not to Tell by the same author. So much that to this day I still think about the Potato Girl. It was just an all around amazing novel. So my expectations for Dismantled were already through the roof when I picked it up. I guess that's what ultimately led me to be more than a little disappointed in it.
I guess my biggest gripe with the book were the characters. I just didn't like any single person in Dismantled, to the point where I could really not care less what happened to them. Suz, the leader of the Compassionate Dismantlers was anything but. Seriously, she was a total sociopath. I kept thinking about the psychology class I took last semester and thinking "She exhibits every single one of the characteristics of not only sociopathy but of narcissistic personality disorder". And then we have the rest of the characters: Henry, a bumbling idiot if I ever knew one and Tess was just plain annoying. Winnie, another one plagued with issues. All of these characters were just so unappealing.
The thing that bugged me the most was that Henry and Tess were clearly terrible parents. If my daughter was nine years old and still had an imaginary friend, the first thing I would do would be to have her evaluated. None of this "she's just an imaginative child, we should be proud" crap. You get a professional's opinion first. And if said daughter is in a pool, the last thing you want to do is get blitzed because then her imaginary friend is really going to be the least of your worries with the daughter being drowned and all. Now, the daughter, I found her to be all over the place. I just didn't find her "voice" at all credible. Sometimes she exhibited wisdom beyond her years and then other times (more often than not) she did something that a nine-year-old would just know better than to do. I found that she was written a bit clunky.
Also, Dismantled wasn't all that creepy. Now Promise Not to Tell scared the hell out of me. Dismantled...not so much. I just didn't buy Henry's "the doll is really Suz" theory. It was way too out there. And I read this one at night and it didn't even get one raised arm hair. The whole "Danner" thing was a bit off-putting, but again that was because I kept thinking "Man, these parents. Poor child..." Not scary in that whole "I'm going to leave my light on for the rest of the night" kind of way.
Still, I gave this book two stars instead of the dreaded one. Why? Because, man, was it a page-turner! Sure, the characters made me roll my eyes, but I still wanted to find out what happened. Not to them, but I wanted the whole plot, particularly the one with the "old" Compassionate Dismantlers to unravel. So, I have to say overall, the book was disappointing. Maybe if I hadn't already read Promise Not to Tell, I would've enjoyed it more. But since I did, all I could think was that Jennifer McMahon has definitely done better...
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7 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Weird story about stupid people, June 9, 2010
This review is from: Dismantled: A Novel (Hardcover)
I really think I've had my fill of tales about reclusive college types getting into 'intelligent' (really?) scrapes and killing one of their members.
I read The Secret History and hated it because all the characters were so up themselves and unlikeable. This was even worse. Unlike The Secret History, it did move on sharpishly and was readable, and didn't pretend it was a literary classic, but I still hated all of the characters. Why are these people so nasty and obnoxious? This crew seemed hell bent on destroying everything in their path - why should I sympathise with any of them? Why did Henry love Suz so much - she was a foul-mouthed, weird control freak and obviously not into men. Not my idea of attractive.
I just didn't feel comfortable or 'at home' with any part of this novel, although the premise was a decent one. I felt there was far too much attention paid to the female characters and their sexuality (I found the fact that THREE of them were lesbians/bisexual a bit hard to believe) and Henry just seemed overwhelmed by all of them (including his daughter) all the time. There was far too much emphasis on dreams and visions about dying and drowning - does Henry really still have these terrifying visions after ten years?
I tried to feel sorry for the lonely daughter but in truth, she was just a bit too weird as well! I wanted to tell her to get a grip - she was nine after all. Why did Tess and Henry not find the whole Danner thing REALLY WEIRD?!!
I sometimes like off-the-wall novels but this one just didn't ring true. And the double-twist at the end was just thrown in abruptly and was... you guessed it. Weird. And stupid.
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