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3.0 out of 5 stars
lots of great information, but poorly written, April 16, 2004
This review is from: Disneyland Detective: An Independent Guide to Discovering Disney's Legend, Lore, and Magic (Paperback)
I'm very torn about this book. On one hand, it's full of fascinating trivia and historical details, including locations and descriptions of hidden Mickeys in the park (a subject not well covered by any other printed Disneyland guide), and since it's a trade paperback, it would be easy to carry into the park for reading in lines. On the other hand, it's poorly written and terribly copy-edited: misspellings, sentence fragments, misused words, incorrect punctuation. On the basis of the contents of the book, I would have given it 4 stars, but the copy editing is so bad that I had to downgrade it to 3. I hope that if there's a second edition, the publisher will fix some of the many errors. On the whole, though, I'd recommend this book as a worthwhile addition to a Disneyland book collection.
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22 of 22 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Disneyland Detective Needs Course in Report Writing, December 7, 2004
This review is from: Disneyland Detective: An Independent Guide to Discovering Disney's Legend, Lore, and Magic (Paperback)
This book may be packed with lots of information, although not all of it is correct, the editing is extremely poor. There are numerous missing words, incorrect grammar, incorrect punctuation, mis-used words, and spelling mistakes. I find it very hard to believe that this book was actually published in its current state. I wonder if the publisher and/or author were just trying to profit from the Disney name?
Some of the information about Walt Disney World is incorrect. The book states that the Astro Orbitor attraction in Florida is called Star Jets. It is called Astro Orbiter. The book also states that on the Florida Space Mountain riders ride side-by-side; they don't. Riders sit one behind the other on the Florida Space Mountain.
The book also has a sidebar that states that Walt Disney produced "Island at the Top of the World" in 1974; that would have been a little hard since Walt Disney passed away in 1966.
This book needs better editing and needs the content to be reviewed to make sure it is accurate. It still does have some good information in it, but I'd recommend waiting for an updated version (and check it out first before you buy it).
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35 of 38 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Entertaining, but poorly proofread...is it accurate?, August 15, 2004
This review is from: Disneyland Detective: An Independent Guide to Discovering Disney's Legend, Lore, and Magic (Paperback)
My kids and I enjoyed reading this book while on vacation to Disneyland last week, especially looking for the hidden Mickeys. Nevertheless, the poor proofreading with many spelling and grammatical errors made me wonder: If the author/editor/publisher can't even publish a book that's proofread accurately, how can the reader trust the accuracy of the stories, anecdotes and "facts" in this book? The author even thanks the editor in the introduction!
Nevertheless, the price is right, and with the above caveats, I can recommend this book as a fun supplement to a Disneyland vacation.
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