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On average, each page of text is missing about two dozen commas.
One example:
"Without the necessary act of satisfaction[,] what is called the moral consciousness could not be preserved."
Then there are the pedantic (and barely readable) constructions such as the following.
Halls's version:
"By this is explained why some acts have so frequently been held to be criminal..."
Revised:
"This explains why some acts have so frequently been held to be criminal..."?
Halls's version:
"Undoubtedly most of these are not harmful, for if they were, in such conditions the individual could not live."
Revised:
"Undoubtedly, most of these are not harmful; if they were, the individual could not live."
Finally, there are sentences that are so obfuscatory, I don't know how to fix them:
"In both cases the force shocked by the crime and that rejects it is thus the same." (I'm not kidding, this is one of Halls's actual sentences.)
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