I finished your story and I must say, I LOVED it! You kept me in
suspense the whole way through. You did a wonderful job of character
development and setting the scenes. You have a marvelous way with descriptions
that really puts the reader in each scene. One can feel what the characters
feel - even someone who doesn't necessarily have claustrophobia or a fear of
the dark - and I could almost smell the dank musty cave myself!~~Lorri Brisson~~
I usually go to bed early, like 9pm. I stayed up past 3 am
finish your book-unheard of!!!! Needless to say, the expressions, story,
characters all held me in their grip. I miss them now it's over.
I love the fact that this is an intelligent
group of characters, and Kit doesn't snivel or scream.
Grey (oh, we LOVE Grey, what a MAN!!!) Lorraine Chittock