8 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Almost about Worsel., May 31, 2005
This is billed as a continuation of the Lensman saga, and a story about Worsel. The first is true; the second isn't.
In this era of Star Wars: Expanded Universe, and endless Star Trek novels, not to mention the Brian Herbert's prequels, and pre-prequel Dune novels, you get used to other people wanting to build upon others ingenuity. Occasionally, as in the case of the novelization of Revenge of the Sith, and in ST:TNG "Q-Squared," you get surprising winners. However, most of the time, to books read like a mediocre episode of the series.
It is not that Kyle has big shoes to fill. Rather, he has quirky shoes that are several decades out of style. You can forgive Doc Smith for writing pulp because he was a bona fide pulp writer. Kyle, however, has a better soul, prose, and style that does not flow well with Doc Smith's.
In some ways, this is an improvement. Doc could get word and awk-"wordy" at times. The pacing was too quick at times, and the breezy slang can be like reading another language. This slows the modern reader down.
I think Kyle has only two problems. One, he tweaks the Lensman continuum too much. With 29 of 6 not getting the regenerative treatment that was already established "Second Stage Lensman," it was a hefty discontinuity. Since this is a main character, it did not seem believable.
Then there is the problems of el-sike, a purely Kyle invention which doe not flow out of the original Doc cannon.
Second, you could feel the influence of other SF in this book-Pok reminded me of the Death Star, Arrow-22-a here-and-gone character-was Hal 9000 with a stutter.
The last and biggest problem is that this story is not about Worsel, but about Kallatra. The Old Snake is the point of view character, but he is not the main character, in the same way that Holmes provides the POV, with Sherlock the main charter. The resolution of the plot hinges upon Kallatra. Consequently, she steals all of Worsel's potential thunder. The Snake is more of a mentor (no pun intended), with Kinnison and Mentor being redundant beings.
I find Kallatra a very disturbing character. She appears out of nowhere, is the central being to the plot, and undergoes an agonizing near death with the entire Galactic Patrol and Lensman Corps looking on in awe. In short, she is a MARY SUE character.
So . . . if you are a die hard Lensman fan, buy the whole trilogy to round out your collection. But do not expect the same type of book. It is an easier read, but not as good a story.
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6 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Disappointing, June 18, 2006
With E.E. Smith long gone, the readers who loved his Lensman series could only hope for an addition like those that followed Dune. Dune's sequels followed (even explained), in perfect style- the original series.
This book breaks E.E.'s style and technology so blatantly, it can only be called a Lensman book by virtue of licensing, and the names of the characters. Smith created whole technologies, within the constraints of his era's science. This book breaks all the technological parameters set by Smith. In "Dragon" we have high-tech AI when, 20 years later in the REAL series, the computer at Grand Base on Tellus is still "Kicking out (punch) cards". This just does not fit.
If you want to return to the worlds of Tellus and Klovia, where Lensmen guard the galaxy, men were men, and girls were girls, this book is NOT for you. The short story "Doomed Lensmen" (google the name to find copies online) does a much better job FOR FREE.
Someday, I hope the Smith Estate has the wisdom to commission someone of Kevin J. Anderson's ability (who wrote the 6 new Dune novels). Then we can REALLY go back and enjoy the 20 years between "Second Stage Lensman" and "Children of the Lens".
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4 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
almost as good as E.E.Smith, October 30, 2000
This review is from: The Dragon Lensman (Paperback)
I just finished reading The Dragon Lensman, and though it was not as satisfying as the first six books of E.E. Smith's Lensman Series, it was still fantastic reading.
I had started reading it before, but laid it down unfinished. Then I discovered Z Lensman, read it, enjoyed it, then came back and read Dragon.
I do suggest, however, that you read Dragon first, then Z second, as Z builds on some of the events of Dragon, then, of course, read the Rigellian version.
If you love E.E.Smith's books, as I do, then definitely read David Kyle's three Lensman books, written from the points of view of the other three Second Stage Lensmen.
John (www.MAZES.com) Knoderer
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