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2.0 out of 5 stars
Could have been much better, November 29, 2005
This review is from: Dreamland: A Novel of the Ufo Cover-Up (Paperback)
MJ-12, Roswell, alien abductions, missing time, hypnotic therapy, extraterrestrial/human hybrids, captured aliens, conspiracies to left and right; all this and more can be found in "Dreamland", written by Ernest Hemingway's niece and her husband and published in 1995.
The heritage from Hemingway is very apparent from the first to the last page, even though Hilary and her husband never are even close to Ernest's literary achievements. The sentences are often short, descriptions of the environment are few and insufficient, and more than once the text feels extremely unrealistic when the most spectacular events imaginable are met with not much more than a shrug of the shoulders from the main characters. Writing fiction about the supernatural and the paranormal is a difficult art to master, and Hemingway and Lindsay fail miserably from page one.
Any reader with basic knowledge in UFO history will recognize much from the story. The excitement is therefore somewhat killed, since it's often not very hard to figure what will happen next. At the end the story is twisted quite interestingly, however, that doesn't take away the fact that the rest of the story has been extremely dull.
But this is, again, if the reader has previous knowledge of UFO history. For the "normal" reader, who has never heard of things taken for granted by sceptical ufologists, the book is sure to offer several interesting moments. Hemingway and Lindsay have used more or less everything offered by lesser sceptical ufologists and added a story about a man and his wife who are caught in the line of fire between the American military and peaceful extraterrestrials.
But, the main problem with the book is that is just feels uninspired. The sections about alien abductions feels as if they were taken right out of any Budd Hopkins book, and the argumentation regarding the Roswell incident is just plain awful. The credibility is reduced, and thus the entire reading experience is ruined. This is too bad, because a skilled author is very likely to have been able to make something good out of the whole mess.
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Could have been much better, November 22, 2005
This review is from: Dreamland: A Novel of the Ufo Cover-Up (Paperback)
MJ-12, Roswell, alien abductions, missing time, hypnotic therapy, extraterrestrial/human hybrids, captured aliens, conspiracies to left and right; all this and more can be found in "Dreamland", written by Ernest Hemingway's niece and her husband and published in 1995.
The heritage from Hemingway is very apparent from the first to the last page, even though Hilary and her husband never are even close to Ernest's literary achievements. The sentences are often short, descriptions of the environment are few and insufficient, and more than once the text feels extremely unrealistic when the most spectacular events imaginable are met with not much more than a shrug of the shoulders from the main characters. Writing fiction about the supernatural and the paranormal is a difficult art to master, and Hemingway and Lindsay fail miserably from page one.
Any reader with basic knowledge in UFO history will recognize much from the story. The excitement is therefore somewhat killed, since it's often not very hard to figure what will happen next. At the end the story is twisted quite interestingly, however, that doesn't take away the fact that the rest of the story has been extremely dull.
But this is, again, if the reader has previous knowledge of UFO history. For the "normal" reader, who has never heard of things taken for granted by sceptical ufologists, the book is sure to offer several interesting moments. Hemingway and Lindsay have used more or less everything offered by lesser sceptical ufologists and added a story about a man and his wife who are caught in the line of fire between the American military and peaceful extraterrestrials.
But, the main problem with the book is that is just feels uninspired. The sections about alien abductions feels as if they were taken right out of any Budd Hopkins book, and the argumentation regarding the Roswell incident is just plain awful. The credibility is reduced, and thus the entire reading experience is ruined. This is too bad, because a skilled author is very likely to have been able to make something good out of the whole mess.
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2.0 out of 5 stars
Starts off strong, then runs out of gas, December 14, 2004
As has been noted, this novel cranks up the intensity level straight out of the gate. There's quite a bit of familiarity with the UFO/Abduction scenarios as reported and the authors initially make good use of the lore.
Still, some things nag at the reader: The characters are not developed beyond that of two-dimensional cardboard cut-outs to varying degrees. Most egregious example is that of the Noo Yawker psychiatrist Carol Blum, relocated to Los Alamos for some unknown reason.
She's a real pain in the neck, a complete caricature of a fast-talking, obnoxious and smarmy Manhattanite. You can forgive yourself for feeling glad when she's murdered near the end. With her abundant "'tude," you'll wonder why someone didn't off her previously.
The lead characters, Stan and Annie Katz are similar smarmy transplanted Noo Yawkers, the authors having seen fit to outfit them with a de rigueur Volvo wagon. Completely unbelievable is how Annie goes from hardened UFO skeptic to full-on True Believer after just one meeting and hypnosis session with a MUFON investigator.
Of course ... there are the evil shadow government types after Annie and her husband, led by the malevolent Colonel Wesley. All through the book I was really hoping that Wesley'd finally get those particle beam weapons up and running and vaporize the aliens to their own Kingdom Come, but it's not to be. The ending takes a left turn into New Age Twinkie John Mack/Richard Boylan territory. The aliens you see, are here, I guess to help us somehow? They have to take fetuses for some strange reason from pregnant women during abductions to preserve their own species it would seem. And all they want to do is return to their home planet, but they can't because of the evil US government and the machinations of career military types within MJ-12.
Now in my book, if something comes out of the skies like a thief in the night and prods and pokes and removes ovum, fetuses, other genetic material, etc. without consent, I'd say they'd be a pretty good candidate for aiming particle beams at 'em. But no... The aliens are *nice* and are led by the doll-like "Mr. Boojum" whom, like E.T. only wants to go home. Awwww...
How do they do it? Well, Mr. Boojum is from a collectivist space hive society that is like some super-Stalinist galactic gulag: Individual aliens are bred for specific tasks and cannot or are not permitted to know information outside their own school-to-work programming. So for some strange reason, this civilization beams information to Annie so that the aliens can manipulate Stan to build this weapon, which could be transformed into a propulsion device by means not explained. Why they can beam information, but not just send another ship is not explained.
So finally at the end, Annie gets her baby back, Mr. Boojum gets his propulsion system and all that are still alive are happy. It's like a regular "We Are The Off-World" singalong... As the other reviewer wrote, perhaps it'd be best to come up with your own ending. Mine has the aliens disappearing in a flash of light, never to return...
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