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The Earthborn

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Earthborn is one of the more disappointing reads I've had in years. I was attracted to it by the cover art by Jon Foster and by the synopsis written inside the jacket. Unfortunately, the jacket synopsis turned out to be better written than the book.

The premise was intruiging enough: a multi-generation interstellar colony ship destined for Tau Ceti ends up instead torn by internal conflict and returning to a post-apocalyptic Earth, and conflict ensues between the imperialist/fascist high-tech Skyborn and the survivalist low-tech Earthborn, with all of the main characters kids due to vaguely described afflictions affecting both societies. But the novel itself is plagued with even worse afflictions: (1) The characters never rise above anything but sketches, with so little description you never have any clear idea of their appearance and with so little identity you don't feel anything when bad things happen to them. In most of the novel they seldom come across as anything but talking heads. (2) The setting is generic throughout, from the generic colony ship to the generic post-apocalyptic cityscape. For a story that's supposed to be set in a post-apocalypic Melbourne, Australia, the details are so sketchy and generic that it could be any low-budget sci-fi movie set anywhere in the world. And worst of all (3) The prose style is passive and distancing, with the author always telling instead of showing, making for a very dull read. The following excerpt is typical:

"Sarah swung down with a piece of timber and drove another stake into the ground. She knew that the ninety-yard-high mountain ash forests with the understory of blackwood and tree ferns provided decent cover from Colony craft, but even at this early stage, she was planning to outmaneuver Colony. She had no delusions about ever conquering the Skyborn, but maybe, just maybe, she could discourage them. Even now she realized that time was her enemy."

This is pretty much how the whole novel reads, and the further it goes, the worse it gets. After about halfway through I has having to force myself to keep reading, and I was even more annoyed at the end (after a confusing strung-out fight where half the characters die but you don't feel anything because they were never more than sketches) to find that the story is not complete at the end because this is only the first book in a series, a series I have no interest whatsoever in continuing.

If you're looking for something good in similar veins, I would recommend Heinlein's Orphans in the Sky (for the divided multi-gen colony ship), Wyndham's The Chrysalids (for the post-apocalyptic society) or even the "Miri" episode of the original Star Trek TV series (for the kids plague that kills you when you reach adulthood). As for Earthborn, I could only recommend it to younger readers who haven't read much science-fiction and who aren't very demanding about what they read in general. For anyone else, don't waste your time or your money.

Three hundred years ago, the Colony starship was launched to colonize the world of Tau Celi but when they arrived, there was no habitable world to colonize. Some of the passengers felt they should continue but those who wanted to return home took command of the ship. They land on what used to be Melbourne and plan to commit genocide on the genetically inferior humans that survived.

Welkin Quinn is one of the first groups of Skyborn sent out to reconnoiter the area and he falls in with a clan of Earthborn who want to unite the people into a cohesive group so they can do more than survive. Welkin learns that the Skyborn have fed him misinformation and throws in his lot with Sarah and her group. Enemies surround them from the Skyborn to the barely human ferals to the roaming gangs of jabbers who work with the Skyborn to destroy the Earthborn.

This is Paul Collin's first book published in the United States and it is easy to see why this Australian author is a hit back home. The story line is fast paced but does not skimp on character development. The hero learns that his ship's elders had an agenda to stay in power when they got to earth. He inserts himself into a group of Earthborn survivors that have a chance of uniting the various disease free factions on Earth if they can figure out a way of appropiating technology only available on the Colony. This is the first installment in what looks to be a great new series

Harriet Klausner

Earthborn is the story the desendents of those left behind when Colony, the giant mother ship went searching for a new place for mankind 300 years ago. It is a companion book to Skyborn....the story of those raised on the ship before it crashed back to Earth. The charactors and stories intertwine. I read Skyborn first. There are some nice elements of leadership, primate anthropology and civilization gone bad. The Australian setting was interesting. They are simple good reading...bedtime stuff.

Wish it had been better. The book seemed to lack detail and had a certain, I dont know, "fakeness" to it. Of course it is Science Fiction, but I just couldn't find the characters believable. I think the author should have devoted a few more pages on character development and back story. I thought the beginning went too fast and could have provided more depth to the fanaticism of the Skyborn and their mysterious past. An okay read, but I found myself struggling to finish instead of anticipating the next read. Hopefully, the sequel will be better.

An award-winning Australian writer, Paul Collins makes his North American debut with "The Earthborn". Though Collins is best known for his action sequences, his creation of unique and believable societies along with the character development of the protagonist Welkin Quinn make "The Earthborn" a work that will be enjoyed on a number of levels.

Born aboard the terra-forming skyworld `Colony', Welkin Quinn is raised in the militaristic culture of the Skyborn. As this society prepares for its return to earth, its leaders--an order of elders--brainwash the people of `Colony', using misinformation to ingrain a hatred of the Earthborn and a fear of the Skyborn's homeworld, Earth. Using these emotions, the elders plan to commit genocide.

When Welkin is falsely labeled as a seditionist, he is tortured and threatened. He is told that his only opportunity for redemption is to prove his loyalty by serving as a member of the Skyborn expeditionary force--an assignment where fewer than half of the Skyborn expect to survive. When his group is attacked by a viscous pack of Earthborn predators--the Jabbers--Welkin is rescued by an Earthborn woman named Sarah. Sarah leads a band of noble Earthborn, a makeshift family of sorts. Her family struggles for survival in post-apocalyptic Melbourn, a landscape populated by rival gangs who engage in turf-wars for precious commodities of food and medicine.

Placed in an unfamiliar and hostile environment, Welkin Quinn is forced to think for himself--forced to confront the worldview with which he has been indoctrinated since birth. His revelation leads him down the path where friend and foe, right and wrong seem terribly reversed. To survive, Welkin must confront the society that created him and discover his place in a new world.

The story of Welkin and his newfound family continues in Collins' recently released novel "The Skyborn" (2005), and the soon-to-be-released conclusion to the trilogy: "The Hiveborn" (Fall 2006).

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" ... worthy of sitting on the same shelf with early Heinlein and Norton" -- Don D'Ammassa, SF Chronicle 2003