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3.0 out of 5 stars
Small size disappointing, April 20, 2006
This review is from: East of the Sun and West of the Moon (Hardcover)
The book I mean. I absolutely love this series and was immensely looking forward to reading this book. When I got it, I was shocked at how thin (in pages) it was. This is usually not a hang-up with me. I almost never check the amount of pages a book has. Especially with one of my favorite authors. This book was 320 pages, his other books in this series were up over 420-540 pages.
So what about the story? While the concept for the storyline was very cool, the writing and plot development could have been flushed out a lot more. A lot. There is a lot of time spent trying to develop Megan and her harem posse. Amusing, but too much frill without the meat of a good story. This book boils down to one plot line, the good guys going to get the ship. So much opportunity for more. I love Ringo, but man, his editor screwed up here, he/she should have thumped Ringo on the head before publishing this book.
To be completely honest, this feels like something thrown together to meet a deadline. So, even though I enjoyed the book, it was just good. It could have been and should have been great, just like all the previous books in this series.
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25 of 30 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Continuing Decay of Ring's Writing Quality, May 12, 2006
This review is from: East of the Sun and West of the Moon (Hardcover)
Johm Ringo has an interesting habit. The first book in a series is excellent. Simply oustanding. The second is good. The third is mediocre. The fourth is horrible. This is seen in this series, and most strikingly "Legacy of the Aldenta" - A Hymn Before Battle being outstanding, and the series deteriorating from there. Hell's Faire was the fourth novel in that series.
Funnily enough, this is the fourth book in the series "The council Wars."
I cannot express my disappointment with Ringo's... odd behavior. We know, quite certainly, that he is a better writer than this. He is able to produce excellent military fiction - compelling characters, riveting combat, and epic worlds.
But the more he writes, the more it becomes clear that John Ringo prefers to write trivial trash than interesting fiction. This is one such example.
The plot is basic: Herzer, a character developed in previous books, is to lead an assault team onto a space ship and recover the fuel. We learned about the ship in previous books.
I don't know how Mr. Ringo manages to squeeze a book out of this.
The entire novel feels more as if Ringo was forced to churn out a novel in the series in short order, rather than taking the time to invent a credible plot with interesting twists.
I don't know if Ringo is unable or unwilling to craft comeplling novels. But either way, he certainly isn't doing it - and you certainly shouldn't waste your money.
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8 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
East of the Sun & West of the Moon, November 8, 2006
This review is from: East of the Sun and West of the Moon (Hardcover)
I completely disagree with most of the reviews that have been posted. I thought that the book flowed well giving the reader developement of the major characters and driving the plot forward. While I was disappointed that we still haven't heard what has happened with the elves and Bun-Bun, it is not unusual for authors to have characters like these that are not in every novel.
Some of the remarks previously written are not only insulting, but poorly written. John Ringo has not in any way "riden" on David Weber's shoulders; he was picked up by Jim Baen and while he has collaborated with Weber on specific books, he has also written with many other authors that were just as well as the collaborations with Weber.
Thermite does leave Iron as a by product but it would have also: 1 burned up all the oxygen in the area, 2 produced minute particulate, and 3 requires a more advanced industrial structure than has been described. Additionally, being an explosive, Mother would have prevented its use.
Simple dart guns may have worked as described but how do we know that they would have even affected the Orcs? Only if the darts were actually Flechettes (which again would strain the industrial structure described) would they exceed the speed of sound to any significant extent and even have the possibility of harming the Orcs. However this also brings in the added likelyhood of it puncturing the hull (due to size and speed). As they wanted to CAPTURE the ship, this is contrary to the already specified objective.
I am severely disappointed that due to a few misguided and ill-thoughtout reviews here on Amazon.com that John Ringo has decided to not write the next novel. I can only hope that he will reconsider and not let a few bad apples spoil this excellent series for the rest of us.
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