5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
So, So but not Great, November 13, 2000
This review is from: An Eighth of August (Hardcover)
I read the authors previous novel 'Only Twice I've Wished For Heaven' and enjoyed it so much that I was eagerly anticipating this novel. I was however somewhat disappointed.
This novel is about the events surrounding a celebration of the signing of the Emancipation Proclamation which occurs every year in the Midwest. This story is told from the perspective of several different characters which at times renders the novel difficult to understand. Although the author takes the time to convey to the reader which character is speaking and the time frame (year) in which they are recounting their story, the novel jumps back and forth between time periods and characters in a manner which is often very confusing.
At the beginning of the novel, the reader is introduced to Flossie who pulls a gun on a minister in the middle of a church service. The reader is made aware that she, Flossie holds the minister responsible for some "un-Christian like" behavior. However it is not until the middle of the book, after much discussion of Flossie and her life after this event ( attempted shooting of the minister), that the reader discovers what that event is. After the reader is made aware of the event, the author incorporates the same opening scene into the novel at a later date and continues the story from that point.
The reader also is told that a tragic event occured which resulted in the death of one of the children, EL of one of the characters, (Sweet Alma, Flossie's daughter) and we know that another of the characters (Pepper) feels to blame and feels responsible but by the end of the novel, it is unclear, based on the circumstances of the death, why he feels that way. The author also tells us that Flossie, El's grandmother feels as if Pepper is to blame for the death. However, the reason why she holds him responsible is never fully explored. Additionally, the reader is made aware of an incredible rift between Flossie and Sweet Alma however once again, although the basis of the rift was there, the author didn't seem to fully explore the impact that it had on the parties.
The story is also told from the perspective of May Ruth, a white English woman who, although a charming character, somehow becomes involved in the festivities and lives with the main family.
All in all, although the story could have been a good one, the events and characters jumped too much and too drastically. Once again, although the story surrounded the celebration, it was incredibly difficult, based on the way the novel was written, to understand how the stories told by each character directly fit into the celebration.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Couldn't finish it!, December 6, 2000
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This review is from: An Eighth of August (Hardcover)
I tried to read this book,but I couldn't follow it. I got to about page 55 when I just couldn't take it anymore. I usually try to finish any book I start, but this one was torture. She jumps from character to character, and I just couldn't follow her. I wasn't sure who was who, or what was what. I was still waiting to find out what happened to El. I'm willing to give her first book a try, because I've read some pretty good reviews about it, but I wouldn't suggest this one to anyone.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Love the time frame, February 17, 2002
This review is from: An Eighth of August (Hardcover)
An eighth of august is the story of a just everyday family in the 60's going through problems. The story is told through different members of the family. The story is centered around El, the young nephrew, death a year before. The family is again getting ready to attend the county festive where the tradgedy struck the year before. The story setting is before and after the death took place. I like reading books with the time frame of the 60's I throught the book was good, but kinda of confusing with the years.
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