I did not enjoy Elemental as much as I hoped I would. While it had enormous potential (with intriguing premise), it didn't quite live up to it. Emily White has a great imagination, maybe even too great, cause she obviously had so many ideas, so many world elements that she wanted to include, that it was literally mind-blowing. Unfortunately, not in a good way. I felt extremely overwhelmed while reading this book. Science Fiction is "a literature of ideas", filled with space travels, extraterrestrial beings, futuristic settings, weapons and technology, and while Elemental has all that, it also fails to rationally explain the alternative world it features. All the SF elements are very superficial, they're there, but they're not doing anything for the book. There are no potential solutions nor explanations to the various fictional elements, and therefore I am more willing to call it a space opera with paranormal elements, than an actual SF.
Elemental left me feeling confused and frustrated. I kept thinking that I must have missed something, must have blacked out and forgot a good chunk of the plot, because I just couldn't make sense of it. There are some interesting ideas embedded within its pages - freedom and its meaning, prophecies, dangerous abilities and many different cultures and religions - but inevitably, White's book suffers from near-terminal inability to tame the chaos and get everything organized and arranged in a comprehensive manner. Nothing - and I mean NOTHING - was explained properly, and while some may argue that the plot was purposefully crafted this way, and that SF allows a certain degree of vagueness and mysteriousness, I say: NO! I want to know why the main character was locked up on a prison-ship for ten years and by whom, I need to have more information about the world, the many different races and their cultures, the interspecies politics, and the prophecy that seemed to be the reason behind everything that happened in this novel. I need some answers. And Elemental does not provide any.
As hard as it was for me to follow the random and under-developed plot line, I did recognize the potential it held. Yes, it needs some serious editing, but Emily White created something that - if tweaked and polished - could be a real money-making page-turner. The plot line can be improved. The characters? Well, that's a whole different story. I found it practically impossible to connect with any of the characters, especially Ella. Her weirdly motivated behaviour made me frown and shake my head in bewilderment. One moment she was desperate to escape from the prison, save her life, see the sun and feel the wind on her skin, and then next thing you know she's doing everything to get herself killed. For no reason what-so-ever. Her bipolar personality really got on my nerves. She was childish, ungrateful, and - ultimately - unlikeable. Random people would risk their lives to try and help her and she would second guess their motives and act all crazy. One minute she would hate Malik with burning fierceness, and then next minute she would have a change of heart, rush of remorse and adoration, and she would try to sacrifice herself to protect him. Like I said, totally bipolar. No, I did not like Ella. I liked Malik and Meir much better, but at the same time wished their characters would be more fleshed-out and believable (trust me, no one is THAT patient when dealing with a bipolar basket-case like Ella).
And don't even get me started on the abilities she possessed. All I'm going to say is: After witnessing her handling her own powers, I wish she'd remained locked up. If the entire Universe's fate lies in Ella's hands, then we're all in deep doo doo.
There were, however, some aspects of this story that I really enjoyed. I loved Emily's descriptive prose. When she actually bothered to describe the setting or the character in detail, she did it in the utmost skilful and breathtaking way. Some of the passages are very evocative and vibrant, and I really wished she would include more of them throughout the book. There's no doubt in my mind that Emily White is a very talented, eloquent writer, with plenty of room to grow, and I'm certain that she will yet surprise us with something truly extraordinary.
Overall, Elemental just wasn't for me, but don't let my review discourage you from picking it up. I've seen some great, glowing reviews of this book around the blogosphere, and I'm sure that many people will fall in love with the vibrant, intriguing world that Emily created.