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Emotional Structure: Creating the Story Beneath the Plot: A Guide for Screenwriters

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I've read numerous books on screenwriting and this one is at the top of my must-have list. This book gives you the tools to analyze scripts/movies/your own writing from a point of view that is rarely taught or understood. It takes you beyond 3-Act structure and gives you the tools to write not just a clever plot, but a great STORY - one that moves the reader and makes the reader care.

Learning the principles in this book has been an awakening for me as a writer. I feel I have gained the insight I needed to tell the stories I want to tell in a way that connects with and moves my reader on an emotional level. If you are writing lots of cool stuff that "happens" but it doesn't feel like it holds together as a script, this book will teach you how to bring together the plot and the story into a cohesive script and hopefully a cohesive movie.

This is a great book for the beginner or the advanced screenwriter and applies to any genre. A great reference to have on your desk while you're writing. Highly recommend!

You have to dig for it, but there's gold in these pages. In between, there's a lot of cute stuff about the author -- pure unedited egoic writing. Who cares how grateful he is to the inventor of Index Cards?? A serious writer really wants to know How he uses them, Why, What benefits he finds in the process. That info is in the book but it's necessary to scan past the author's love affair with himself.

On the other hand, he does write for film and not for general readers -- maybe no one told him to be more attentive to the reader and less attentive to himself?

If you are a seriously creative writer of fiction or film, buy the book and X-out the paragraphs that are empty of the content you seek.

You will find a lovely concept of emotional flow for you story telling -- great stuff that no one else has addressed in the many "how to write" books that I have read.

He makes good distinctions between Plot [what happens] and Story [the emotional impact on the characters as well as the film viewer or fiction reader].

And he details the emotional path your character must travel.

Dunn is only focused on film scripts but I bought the book as an aid to working on novels.

Get the book and go mining for the good stuff -- take a deep breath and pass over the gunk.

Peter Dunne's practical and experience based book on screenwriting gives very specific analyses of a variety of well-written films to demonstrate his principles of emotional structure. The films include the unanimously critical and audience acclaimed Lost in Translation, (a low 4 M budget, 40M box office), Witness and Michael Chabon's Wonder Boys. Whether you are writing low or high budget you can relate. The book fleshes out methods of developing emotional underpinnings for each character in a way that propels the plot, instead of plot driving character. Drawing on his years of teaching, writing, producing, and working with writers it is obvious he knows how long it takes to really absorb this kind of material and not just `understand it' intellectually, and wisely uses thorough explanations of techniques. He follows the development of an original screenplay, beginning with three short sentences then through each step of the writing process to a finished screenplay, with notes in the margin discussing the logic of character/story choices. Most books on screenwriting present structural concepts and discussion of the three acts, as does this one, however the uniqueness of this book is its' use of rich metaphors and exploration of characters emotional dynamics that create a much richer context from which to write. There is in depth exploration of the distinction between story and plot showing clearly how these two work in parallel in well-written scripts and how understanding their complementary nature can help you design scenes and sequences that grab and hold your audience. The book is a very powerful writing companion, no matter what genre or budget you are writing.

Peter's book is the only one of its kind, purely focused on character arcs. Character arcs are the heart of any great story telling and most books breeze by the subject without offering enough insight on how to effectively create an organic arc true to your individual story. This book takes it to a completely different level. Peter guides you in building your story's unique emotional structure, and then teaches you on how to extract all the necessary story elements out of the emotional structure, to unify your story and give it an emotional punch. It is an absolute must read for anyone serious about writing.

The revised edition of EMOTIONAL STRUCTURE comes from an award-winning producer and writer who here tackles the elements of adding emotional depth to a plot. The basics of creating an emotionally-charged scene are probed in chapters which show how to balance incidents and responses, follow logical paths and introduce unexpected emotional moments, and how to create emotional honesty within the context of a plot. An excellent survey provides writers with many keys to script success.

Diane C. Donovan
California Bookwatch

I should have posted this months ago. I bought this book, full price at the bookstore because I'd never seen anything like it. I still haven't. This guy is concise, thorough and easy to understand, using small words when small words are appropriate--instead of ten dollar words to show off his knowledge. I love it, have worn it out, and will buy anything else he does. Everyone else has talked about how good this book is. What I'll say is this--thank you for NOT using the sterotypical "archtype" babble, or mythic journey, or GMC, or any of the other overused cliches. This guy spent time thinking. It shows in his writing. Way to go, Dunne.

I am not an aspiring screenwriter. But I am interested in storytelling so I bought a few books on screenwriting. My opinions here certainly represent those of a beginner.

Peter Dunne considers the emotional "outcome" of a story the driving force of the entire story. According to the Dunne, the success of a story depends on whether the storyteller has a clear vision about the emotional ending. The story is a spiritual journey in which the protagonist and co-protagonists "grow" by discovering more about themselves. All the "plots" are just the external realization of an internal journey. The plots have more degrees of freedom than the story per se as a result.

While the central thesis of the book is quite philosophical, Dunne is successful in explaining his points with the plots of many well-known movies. I don't watch too many movies so I have some difficulty in following him. Fortunately, he presented an almost complete screenplay of his own story titled "Indirection." Dunne shows his readers of how the story is developed, from a three-sentence outline to a three-page treatment, and eventually to a full story with all the three parts. This hand-holding exercise is very valuable to me as a beginner. Now I know how everything comes together from start to finish. I also enjoy his story "Indirection" a lot, and it was this story that I could not put down the book.

Peter Dunne's Emotional Structure is an amazing insight into how to tell
a story in screenplay form. It also delves rather smoothly into the higher language of character development. If ever you have wondered how master writer's create characters that come to life when they enter a scene, look no further. From page one, Dunne begins to deliver a master class filled with deep insights into the human condition and doesn't let up till he has you where he wants you. To me, it just makes sense. It's informative, entertaining and great as a reference guide for screen writing at any level. The book is so beautifully written and personal, you feel as though you have known him for years. A good portion of the foundations covered could easily be used in a Psychology or Philosophy class. The end result, your characters and story will make more sense than ever before. I highly recommend it and wish I had access to this book twenty years ago when I started out in the business. It is essential reading for all film
makers, not just screen writers.

In the past few years, I've read quite a few books on the art of screenwriting, some very effective, some very not. Peter Dunne's Emotional Structure is the first I've ever been inclined to write a review of, as it's one I fear could cause some serious damage in the wrong hands.

Dunne approaches his subject with an incredible amount of arrogance. That is, in short, his experience is the universal experience. What he believes is what all screenplays should be about. What works for him is the only way to write a screenplay.

His take on the three-act structure is especially absurd. In his approach, every film must be a buddy picture in which the end result is the restoration of faith. Every film must have a happy ending. "If the point of your script is not some human's recovery," Dunne writes, "then go write poems." Because God forbid you should try to branch out to other topics.

I'm a strong believer in the three-act structure. Adapting your concepts to the skeletal structure of the screenplay, and making it work in a beautiful, organic way, is a major factor in what makes the art of the screenplay so fascinating. But Dunne's version of the same is so tedious and mechanical--you must start use notecards, you must have a co-protagonist, you must make grand statements--that any result from this book will be purely mechanical, not emotional.

And Dunne proves it himself. I've read a lot of these books, but only Dunne has the balls and the arrogance to use his own screenplay, in full, as his primary example. But his screenplay is flat-out terrible--unintentionally hilarious at times. I won't go into great detail on everything that's wrong with Indirection (a title that has little to nothing to do with the screenplay itself), but suffice to say, the beginning and endings are ludicrous, the characters act by rote and not by organic emotion, and the dialogue, which is very bad, could hardly be more on the nose.

Dunne is supposed to be promoting the emotional structure, but he has no sense of how characters would actually behave from an emotional standpoint. He champions a ridiculously specific structure, and then deviates from it by making his Act Three pure resolution. He assumes his limitations are everyone's limitations, and I feel bad for the talented writer who believes him.

So why do I give this book two stars, if it's so horrible?

Well, damn. It's funny. Emotional Structure is an unintentional laugh riot. After using Witness as one of his main examples throughout the book, is it not hilarious that Dunne ends his screenplay with an action-packed finale in Amish country? (I'm surprised "action-packed Amish country showdown" isn't part of his ridiculously specific three-act structure.)

And how about this classic line from the screenplay, in which a runaway 15-year-old girl views the Vietnam memorial?: "How does it do that? How does a thing . . . this marble thing, make me feel . . . so . . . strongly . . . so . . . much?"

"I think that's the secret of Democracy," says some random guy.

This exchange has nothing at all to do with the screenplay. That just makes it funnier.

And once the pretentiousness of Dunne is exposed, it's easy to laugh at the gaffes, like Superman flying around in Gotham City. If you want a book to help you remember what not to do, and crack you up at the same time, this is the one for you.

But if you actually want to learn about screenwriting, look elsewhere. Try Karl Iglesias's Writing for Emotional Impact. It's not perfect, but Iglesias never forgets that all writers are different.

Although marketed as a guide for screenwriters, I think Dunne's clear, logical explanations and thoughtful advice are useful no matter what form of writing you're pursuing. If you're trying to tell a story and make it resonate, take Dunne's advice. A worthy addition to any writer's toolbox.