I gave Burnard's prior novel "
Enemy Within" a great rap - it was interesting, emotional and fun. Indeed, I was so looking forward to this sequel that I pre-ordered from Amazon...
...and then it arrived...
...and within 20 pages I was thinking 'waste of money'.
So what went wrong for me? Two things really:
1. Burnard has amped up the "Mills & Boon" aspect to the point where the plot stalls - nothing happens apart from the two leading characters wanting to jump each other but not quite getting there. It was a background buzz in "Enemy Within", here it's the only focus (and the really weird aspect that jarred me out of the moment page after page is that these two characters are not even of the same species. WHY would they be so attracted to each other? It makes no sense at all.)
2. the plot is a direct repeat of "Enemy Within". So, we have a smart, street-wise heroine with Father issues abducted by a diamond-in-the-rough apparent bad guy; they can't keep their hands off each other; the heroine may be or may not be infected with some terrible plague; loyalties on both sides are conflicted; the heroine incrementally shows previously hidden talents that keep her one step ahead. Not even Clive Cussler rehashes his formulistic Dirk Pitt plots to this extent!
There are other niggles, a major one being that the characters are just too perfectly aware. They make outstanding - and 100% accurate - leaps of intuition time and time again and it just gets a bit tedious because in doing so the tension of the situation is leached away.
By page 101 I was so bored that I elected to re-read Peter Hamilton's excellent "
Mindstar Rising" on a business trip rather than take "Enemy Games".
Clearly, I can't recommend "Enemy Games". The cover illustration shows a femme fatale with a gun when it should show Fabio ripping her bodice open because this time Burnard has gone Mills and Boon to the max and the elements that drove "Enemy Within" are sadly MIA.