Customer Reviews

Erotique

5 star:		(4)
4 star:		(4)
3 star:		(2)
2 star:		(9)
1 star:		(1)

 

 

If you don't like hopping right into the sex, you will not like this book, but if you do, it's excellent. Just a nice little short story about graphic sex and having one's fetishes (exhibitionism, voyeurism and hot boy-on-boy action, in this case) catered to. Plus the man and the lady are married and in love, so it's kinda awesomely romantic as well as sexy. I'm a sucker for healthy marriages in porn.

It's nicely written, and has a few nice little nods to SSC (safe, sane, consensual) while still catering to the fantasy. For what it is, five stars.

Well, I guess it was free, and so I can't complain TOO much, but still, I felt like it was lacking. It was VERY short, and the details and all weren't bad, but I felt kinda robbed when you thought you were getting to the good part and it just ended. I pushed 'next page' and it was the 'about the author' part, and I felt unsatisfied. Still, not bad, for a free book.

This was not worth reading, even for free! It is a short, short story with little build up for anything.

I enjoyed the story. It was this great build up for when they would get to perform, but then it was bland. Maybe next time keep the heat going a little longer...

The story is about an exhibitionist couple on vacation in France in a very liberal part of town. I gave it 4 stars cause of the idea and what led up to them getting on stage. I didn't give them a 5 cause when they finally hit the stage it was such a disappointment.

After I first bought my Kindle, I went on a downloading spree of every free book I could find. This included short stories and included Erotique, which I remember months later. This is not because it was good, but because I remember being so frustrated with it. The plot sounded intriguing, but it felt like it was way too short and ended in the middle of the climax of the novel. I expected more and instead just got the "about the author" section when I turned the page. It only took a few minutes to read, but the fact it left me hanging was not very appreciated. On top of that, I didn't even see much good about this. The dialogue was weird and the whole scenario seemed...squicky. Not because of the voyeurism part, but because the characters seemed really creepy, especially the husband.

Two stars, and that's pushing it to be honest.

Say what now. Come on I know amazon/authors gives us these freebies for the kindle but COME on give us more good freebies. The book is so so-ish and I found that hard to say. But whoever is reading these reviews and you want to know if you should try it try it because it's a freebie and also read it to form your opinion maybe you will like it.

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Story starts immediately with sex (which may or may not work for you). The focus is voyeurism & light BDSM, both of which are weak and diluted. For a story that JUMPS right into sex, it should be sexier, more inline with it's subject matter ~ to simply state, it should be HOTTER OR the story should be better defined. This straddles both, it tries be an erotic story and a sexy hot romp and fails.

If you're looking for enticing and exciting erotica, I suggest passing up this short story. The author spends more time setting the stage (no pun intended) than she does actually describing what goes on between the main character and her husband. Personally, this story did not make me "hot and bothered" - isn't that the purpose of literature like this? - and I definitely would not read it again.

This quick piece of erotica was hot and enjoyable. The ending, however, seemed a bit abrupt... as though the story was all foreplay and no climax.