Amazon.com Review
David Herter's debut novel, the SF adventure
Ceres Storm, appeared amid a flurry of well-deserved praise. With his second novel, Herter turns to contemporary fantasy in the mode of Gene Wolfe and Charles de Lint.
A composer struggling to create in the wake of tragedy, Russell Kent returns to Evening, the Oregon coast town where his wife fell to her death in the shadow of the founder's mysterious mansion. In Evening, Kent finds new creative energy, the possibility of new romance, and a bizarre secret for which he uncovers impossible, undeniable evidence: Evening is built over the entrance of an ancient, subterranean city--one that may still be inhabited.
Though a sensitive, thoughtful, adult novel, Evening's Empire has something in common with a very different work, Disney's kids-oriented animated movie Atlantis: both are an homage to Jules Verne's Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea and to the whole Victorian-era school of lost- world adventures, a vast genre nowadays nearly forgotten except for Verne and Edgar Rice Burroughs. It is regrettable that Herter did not incorporate some of the lost-world adventure's adolescent energy in Evening's Empire. The novel's pace is gentle, the tone muted, and a meandering climax diffuses the tension. --Cynthia Ward
From Publishers Weekly
This contemporary riff on Jules Verne, a departure from Herter's well-received SF debut, Ceres Storm (2000), exhibits the same fine storytelling but, sorry to say, closes on a false note. A few years after his wife fell to her death from a cliff in Empire, Ore., Russell Kent returns to the quiet coastal village to compose an opera about Verne's Captain Nemo. Dreams of his dead wife soon trouble Russell's sleep, as do dreams of the town itself strangely altered. He begins an affair with his alluring landlady and gets acquainted with the locals, all the time sensing that everyone in Empire shares a secret. People who otherwise might seem merely eccentric, or behavior that might just be amusing, such as the town's general obsession with the varieties of cheese produced there, become more and more uncanny. The author does an excellent job of presenting everyday events in a slightly odd light. Russell gradually catches on that the folks of Empire believe that they're on the verge of literally unearthing something wonderful. Herter cranks up the suspense, amid increasingly bizarre but still vivid and convincing characters and settings. Unfortunately, the plot unravels in its last pages in a snarl of unexplained revelations and rushed action. While the novel's promotional copy compares it with Gene Wolfe's Peace and Charles de Lint's Newford stories, the cop-out ending is not one either of those pros would have chosen. But all the good writing that goes before suggests that Herter should gain the necessary mastery of his craft in due course.
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