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Everflame [Kindle Edition]

Dylan Peters
4.1 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (841 customer reviews)

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Book Description

Long ago, when the earth was young... Four ancient beings created man to be the bastion of the earth and its creatures. But when The Great Tyrant came and chased The Ancients away, the world was transformed into a place of fear and isolation. Over time humans lost the connection they had with a world they had been created to protect. Now, deep in the forests that surround Gray Mountain, two bears find a small child that is abandoned and left for dead. They name him Evercloud, and raise him as a member of their kingdom. Teaching him the secrets of the elders, they tell him of the ancient beings that created man and the rumors of their return. Evercloud must now go on a quest to return The Ancients to power. However, in another corner of the land, a man known only as The Messenger travels the land under a white hood, on a mission to prevent the return of The Ancients. We follow the paths each of these men take until their stories collide in an epic battle of good versus evil.

Product Details

  • File Size: 2074 KB
  • Print Length: 260 pages
  • Page Numbers Source ISBN: 1105086380
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B008QZMX7E
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #838 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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145 of 152 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Epic fantasy August 25, 2012
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When picking free books you never know quite what you are going to get, self published books can have some real problems...poor editing, grammatical errors etc. Reading an indie book can either be a gross disappointment or a wonderful adventure. Everflame turned out to be a wonderful adventure, think Christopher Paolini meets C.S. Lewis.

Usually, epic fantasy depicts great good battling great evil against almost insurmountable odds, but that isn't strictly the case with Everflame. In the beginning battle lines seem clear, but as the book progresses you realize that there is no clear cut good or evil; each "side" is painted in shades of grey and readers are left wondering just who to root for.

Characters are very well developed, Peters gives each a depth that is reflective of the human condition. For example, Eveneye displays great courage and conviction but later suffers from self-doubt and weakness. There is a strong message of personal responsibility through out, but at the same time Peters drives home the fact that no man is an island...we need support from those who love us to become all we have the potential to be.

To qualify why I only gave 4 stars instead of 5, I do not appreciate abrupt cliffhanger endings. I loved this book and would have purchased the second in the series without the teaser ending. I personally prefer a bit more resolution at the end of an installment of a series. I do have to note that Peters handled the ending of Everflame 2: The Burning Man in a much more satisfactory manner.

For me, the best measure of a book is how much I miss the characters after finishing and after finishing the second book in this series I miss them all. The 3rd book isn't even available but I feel as if I am missing life is going on in their world but I am not fortunate enough to travel with my friends. I highly recommend Everflame and the follow up book, Everflame 2.
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26 of 29 people found the following review helpful
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Again, consider that my native language is not English and that I'm not and expert, not even aficionado, literary critic. I just know what I like and dislike. In this case --and this review is valid for all three books of the Everflame saga, I couldn't stop reading and, at the same time picturing the characters and the environment described like they were from a movie. Silent laughter, sadness and even reflexion, depending on the situation being read came to me as I read this book and the rest of the series. Great light and healthy reading for kids and teens without being burdened with distasteful, crude or sexually charged passages!
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23 of 26 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Amazing! May 17, 2013
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Where do I start?!

When I picked this book I was just going for a free time filler. I've read plenty of free books and the majority are a disappoint due to terrible writing, bland and inconstant characters and poor execution of the story itself.

This however, was the complete opposite!

Dylan does an amazing job with the execution of the story. His creative writing makes the story suspenseful with the simplest of sentences. Every page my, eyes darted anxiously as I waited for the next move of Evercloud and company. I was really captured by the relationship of the characters. I love how The Arthur builds the bond between Evercloud and The bears and I enjoy how he executes Evercloud's behavior during his first interaction among humans. It feels completely realistic and the awkwardness has you cringing in sympathy!

The story behind the ancients is very well developed and quite interesting. The twist with the ancient Chera is one for surprise.But before I babble off spoliers,

It's a really great book, a must read.
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20 of 24 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Excellent November 10, 2012
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Wonderful story, full of good morals and true friendships. Honor and loyality to family. Can't wait to read the rest of the series!
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26 of 33 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars in depth details November 30, 2012
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love books that have this much detail, yet do not bore you like a science report; I Highly reccommend this book for anyone interested in fantasy novels
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48 of 64 people found the following review helpful
1.0 out of 5 stars Poorly edited January 16, 2013
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I really tried to like this book, it was an interesting premise, but the poor punctuation made it unreadable for me. Apostrophes in the wrong places drive me nuts - it's a very basic, very simple rule which an aspiring writer should be able to get right. The punctuation after speech is all wrong too, which made it feel unnatural and stilted. Such a shame.
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13 of 16 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars Children's book July 14, 2013
By Summer
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I downloaded this book thinking it would be a bit more mature than what it is, but it wasn't. It's more for children. I recommend it to children who like stories from an animal's point of view, but it's not my cup of tea.
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28 of 38 people found the following review helpful
1.0 out of 5 stars Not very Compelling April 17, 2013
By Hello
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The book is the first in a series, following a young man raised by bears who goes on a quest to find four god-like immortals and gain magic powers. It hits a lot of beats normal to this genre (prophecy, ancient legends come to life, an assortment of side-quests, a chosen one, etc.) without really adding anything new or doing much to stand out from the crowd. It's a competently written story, but not a very original one. I will give it credit for one very surprising and compelling twist at the end, but it was too little and too late for me, as I'd already grown sick of the world and its characters by that point.

If you're the sort of reader who is bothered by spelling and grammar errors, then AVOID THIS BOOK. In every instance that a person can use an apostrophe wrong, the author does so. Be prepared to slog through pages that misuse who's/whose, it's/its, etc.
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Most Recent Customer Reviews
4.0 out of 5 stars Interesting and Original
Fans of fantasy books will enjoy Everflame.
This was the first book I ever read on a tablet, but it intrigued me so much I quickly got used to it. 4/5 Stars
Published 8 hours ago by Jake Froese
5.0 out of 5 stars Amazing
This book is amazing in every way possible I love the ending
It was a surprise "you are my daughter" dude lol twist
Published 2 days ago by Irene Vasquez
5.0 out of 5 stars Most original story I've read in a long time!
I loved the first part of the book, but almost out it down when the second story began. I'm glad I didn't. The author kept me guessing all the way to the end. Read more
Published 2 days ago by Robyn Yahola
1.0 out of 5 stars Awful
It had some.. Interesting scenes, not for children!
Published 2 days ago by Hayley
5.0 out of 5 stars WHOA!!!!
I honestly picked this book from the cover art. So when I began reading I had no idea what was in store. Wow oh wow I loved it Bears Bears!!! Truly an original story line. Read more
Published 2 days ago by deedee
5.0 out of 5 stars A delightful read.
A vividly told tale to stir young readers imaginations. A book to be shared with boys and girls, alike. It has adventure, riddles to be solved and quests to conquer. Read more
Published 2 days ago by Thresa Carter
5.0 out of 5 stars Everflame is a fantasy book and enjoyed it very much
Everflame is a fantasy book and enjoyed it very much. If you are a fantasy junkie read the series. Most enjouable
Published 4 days ago by Gloria Deutschmann
3.0 out of 5 stars Some really nice ideas but in need of a major edit
Some really nice ideas but in need of a major edit, the big ideas are great but the fantasy world is filled with anachronistic details and language. Read more
Published 7 days ago by J. Robinson
3.0 out of 5 stars Thought this was one complete novel
...VERY disappointed to find this is only the first in a series of books, it did not indicate when getting this free book it had subsequent books to follow. Read more
Published 9 days ago by EeeDee
4.0 out of 5 stars Could I give it 3.5?
I was really close to giving this book 3 stars because of the use of adultery to set up an antagonist pawn, cannibalism to... Read more
Published 9 days ago by J. Wolford
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All 4 books of the Everflame series have been released! Check out to learn more about the books, see images, videos, read sample chapters, enter contests, comment on the forums, read my blog and much more!.

Also, I've taken the ALS Ice Bucket Challenge. For 1 year (August 2014-August 2015) I am donating 10% of the money I make from the Everflame Series to ALS research. Go to to check out the video!

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