Most Helpful Customer Reviews
3 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Truly a 5-star read, June 27, 2008
This review is from: The Evil That Men Do: A Jackson Donne Novel (Paperback)
Jackson Donne is not a happy man. He has suffered through losing his job at the police department, drug abuse and rehab. His fiancée was killed. He has lost his PI License and is working as a night security guard. Jackson is trying to rebuild his life and attend Rutgers University.
Now his sister Susan is begging him to visit his mother in the nursing home. She wants Jackson to find out more about their grandfather. Jackson and Susan's mother is suffering from Alzheimer's and keeps reliving times when she was little. She talks about her father killing a man. Jackson hasn't seen his sister in years and only wants to try to rebuild his own life and isn't interested in the past. Finally after a visit from his brother-in-law Franklin Carter, Jackson agrees to at least look into the matter.
Soon Jackson is forced to solve a mystery that occurred before he was even born in order to save what is left of his family. Susan and her husband, Franklin Carter, are both in grave danger and only answers from the past can help save them. Car bombs, blackmail and more all enter the picture.
Dave White's novels are exciting and keep you on edge all the way. I enjoyed the first Jackson Donne novel When One Man Dies, and this one tops the first.
Armchair Interviews says: Always great to find a story that is so well done.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
3 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Where disbelief goes to die, October 9, 2008
This review is from: The Evil That Men Do: A Jackson Donne Novel (Paperback)
This book doesn't require a suspension of disbelief, it requires that your disbelief be lobotomized.
The author tries to link a series of events that occurred in 1938 to a present day kidnapping, multiple murder, and bombing. An interesting notion that might have been plausible in more capable hands but here it just doesn't work.
Without giving away a key plot device, I'd note that the typical background check, even for a Top Secret security clearance, wouldn't delve into your genealogy and it is unlikely that your employer will tell you about your own past of which you are ignorant when 1) you're adopted, 2) from another country, and 3) when your last name is utterly mundane.
The hero of this story is angst ridden over the loss of his wife. We don't quite know why or how she died, I guess this is a teaser to get us to read the previous novels in this series, or why this matters.
The dialog is clunky and contrived. The characters are cardboard cutouts except when they act out of character -- in this book you will meet the only ex-drug dealer hit man in New Jersey who registers his firearm under his real name and address.
The unbelievable storyline and uninteresting characters are compounded by the author's unfamiliarity with his material. For instance, the recoil from a 9mm handgun will not knock down a 13 year old kid, when an airbag deploys upon impact it immediately deflates, ammonium nitrate doesn't explode - it is an ingredient in making a type of explosive, and on and on.
On the whole, Mr. White could have used a much stronger editor. If you feel compelled to read the book, check it out from your library.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
2 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Over-the-top plot, dumb decisions, August 8, 2008
This review is from: The Evil That Men Do: A Jackson Donne Novel (Paperback)
First Sentence: Joe Tenant tied the barge to the dock.
Ex-cop Jackson Donne has now been stripped of his PI license and has estranged himself from his family, including his mother with Alzheimer's.
His sister, Susan, shows up asking him to visit their mother as she has been rambling about incidents that happened to their family in 1938. Events escalate when her husband is kidnapped for ransom.
I had a hard time getting through this. At the beginning, it is very heavy on product placement--Molson beer, Coach bag, Ryder truck, Verison--which I found distracting.
As it went on, I realized there was no real character development or growth to the characters, so I had no real empathy for any of them. I tried to remind myself that the protagonist was fairly young, but he made an incredibly dumb decision at one point that nearly stopped me.
The plot is over the top. At one point, the protagonist exclaimed he found the villain's motive insane. So did I and, again, it made me want to stop reading.
The best thing about the book, for me, was the twist at the end--and that I was at the end.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
|