Hi there, me again! I got to feeling bad for leaving such a negative review on a book I didn't read, so I took my review down, bought the book, and read it. So now, for a much more informed opinion:
This book is pretty terrible. The writing is extremely clunky, and I'm not certain the author ever even thought about edits. For example, within one chapter, babysitter is spelled three different ways: Baby sitter (wrong); baby-sitter (wrong); babysitter (there you go). Yes, this is a very small, minor thing, but an example of the overall complete lack of attention to detail throughout the entire book. This is the stuff that gives self-publishing such a bad rap.
The dialogue is mostly completely cliched, the story itself has very little form, and all in all it felt very amateur. Don't get me wrong--I am also a writer and completely understand that first novels are often terrible. But that is why they don't get published.