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3.0 out of 5 stars
3 1/2 Stars Could have been better . . ., September 13, 2003
A sequel of sorts to DUCHESS IN LOVE, in that we follow Lady Esme Rawlings to the country where she is staying for the duration of her pregnancy. For those who read DiL, you'll recall that Esme wanted to have a child and coaxed her estranged husband into spending the night with her to achieve it. But not before an unexpected but much longed for sexual encounter with Sebastian, Marquis Bonnington the night before. What Esme did not know was that her husband had a weak heart resulting in his death that night and now a guilt-ridden Esme is not sure who is the father of her child. She has to believe that it's her husband's for inheritance sake but her heart may yearn for something else.
But one person who is suspicious is her nephew by marriage (and her late husband's heir) Simon Darby. Simon has two young stepsisters to provide for and has always fully expected to inherit. Now he is resolved to visit his aunt to see what's what. While there he meets the intriguing Lady Henrietta Maclellan who just happens to be a beautiful, intelligent and wealthy heiress. Hmmm, perhaps he should look for a wealthy wife in case Esme's child is a son!
Henrietta was born with the same lame hip as her mother who died in childbirth. As a result, she has been advised never to marry and certain never to attempt to have children as it could kill her as it did her mother. But she longs for children and when she meets Simon Darby and his two motherless sisters, she sees the family she's always wanted. Simon and Henrietta are attracted to one another and decide to marry only to have her mother tell Simon about Henrietta's condition and that marital relations are out of the question. A disappointed Simon withdraws his offer and plans to return to London. But Esme is not so easily daunted by Henrietta's situation (there are ways to prevent pregnancy afterall) and together they scheme to trap Simon into marriage. She'll get the husband and children she wants and he'll get the fortune he'll need. What could be better? Well, it turns out that Simon does not really need her fortune, but agrees to marry her anyway. Does this mean that he has feelings for her - and she for him? It seems a distinct possibility!
But that's where problems come into the story. In the beginning, we are lead to believe that Simon needs her money, but we find out that he's actually quite wealthy. And why would she not want to consult a London physician about her condition when her longing for a family is so strong? And if Simon had wanted to marry her so badly, why did he not think of using sheaths before he is trapped into marrying her? And the Esme/Sebastian storyline is not exactly resolved; leading me to wonder if they will be seen in yet another book that may just reunited estranged Helene and Rees, Lord and Lady Godwin.
While I enjoyed the relationship between Simon and Henrietta, Esme and Sebastian's reunion and the wit the author is famous for, there are also flaws that keep me from a higher rating. Fans of the series, however, may well overlook such inconsistencies and wait eagerly for the next installment. A flawed but still enjoyable read.
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8 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Good but it didn't end?, October 4, 2003
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I really like Eloisa James' writing. Each of heroes and heroines has a distinct personality and the love stories are really amazing! However, the plot was totally unresolved. The whole book builds up to what will happen to the secondary character, Esme Rawlings, and then there's nothing. We don't know what happens to her, and what happens to her affects the lives of the main characters as part of the suspense during the first half of the book is whether she will have a girl or a boy or twins, etc., and whether or not the main characters will inherit a title and have little cousins. What is that? Did she die? Did she get married/? 3/4 of the book talks about this woman, and then we don't know what happens to her! This book would have been a five-star book, if only it had ended or we were given some clue that there would be a sequel (as in "to be continued"). We are made to care about Esme all throughout the book and then she just drops off the face of the earth (or the pages). The main characters, Simon and Henrietta, were totally likeable. It's a nice change for a romance novel not to have people who are constantly fighting or a hero who is bad-tempered and surly. Anyone who has ever been married knows that there is nothing sexy about a crabby husband! So for that, bravo!
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6 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Another Captivating Novel for Eloisa James!, August 22, 2003
I was very excited to run out and purchase this book after finishing Duchess In Love. James creates strong characters by giving the reader glimpses into parts of them that most writers overlook, leaving their characters flat and devoid of personality or likeability. Not so with Eloisa James - you will LOVE ALL her character, even the secondary ones! One of my favorite parts of this book and Duchess in Love are the characters of Esme and Sebastian. They are the underlying current in both books that will leave you hungry for the next novel. Some would say they they steal the show, but I think all of her characters have a storyline that everyone wants to know the ending of. It's just that she leaves us hanging on for the next book for any more information... isn't that what season cliff hangers are all about?!?!?!
I won't give away any details about the books plot, but i HIGHLY RECOMMEND this book to anyone interestd in Regency Period romance. If you don't read this one or her others, you are missing probably some of the best books on the market in this genre.
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