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2.0 out of 5 stars
Interesting idea, but poor pacing and horrid dialogue, February 6, 2006
This review is from: Forever Will You Suffer (Mass Market Paperback)
This book has a promising start. Rick Summers, the protagonist of this effort from Frank, has just finished visiting the cemetery to mourn his mom and sister. He gets into a cab, and immediately finds that his driver has been replaced by a corpse. A good start, but it's soon downhill from there. I don't want to give away too much of the plot, but I will talk about what hurts this book. Most noticably, the dialogue throughout is stilted and mind-numbing. The characters don't seem capable of any discussion that doesn't focus on flirting, and their deepest statements sound like something a 7th-grader might come up with. Even their thoughts are boring, especially those of Rick, who seems to spend most of his time thinking about how much he'd like to get every female character in this novel into the sack. When he's not concentrating on bedding each woman, or thinking about lesbian action, he turns his mind to other important pursuits like drinking. At points, the book seems like some young man's fantasy life - getting drunk and having sex with hot women. As for the story, there are a couple of problems. The first is that much of it is nonsensible. There are some great ideas, but the author doesn't manage to tie them well together. Added to that is the pacing, which is erratic. Too much time is spent on certain parts, which makes it plodding, while interesting scenes are really glossed over. Again, there are the makings of an interesting story, but they're lost in the clutter. This one may have been saved had the hero been someone with whom we could sympathize, but he's not. Really, I couldn't have cared less by book's end about his fate. This isn't the worst book I've read, but it's not something I would recommend.
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6 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
A bit erratic at first, but then very enjoyable, February 10, 2006
This review is from: Forever Will You Suffer (Mass Market Paperback)
What I've noticed most about all the reviews for this book is that they don't mention the past life aspect of the story. This isn't your typical serial killer out for revenge, but a woman who's been around for a long, long time who's been hurt and is pretty angry about it. I don't recall ever reading a horror novel like this one. Though the first half of the book could've used more editing both in dialog and storyline, the second half of the book settles in for a great read. The story is entertaining and the entire book reads quick. Yes, there are some horror cliches here, but they take away from the story. I don't think the dialog is anywhere near as bad as some people suggest, nor does Rick spend every scene wanting to get drunk and have sex. Yes, there are a couple of scenes where Rick oggles women, but it seems that this is who Rick is. All in all, for a debut novel, I'd say this one's pretty good. Frank has potential to do some great work a long as he remembers to edit and then edit again.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Absolutely Brilliant!, August 23, 2009
This review is from: Forever Will You Suffer (Mass Market Paperback)
Forever Will You Suffer is unlike most modern horror novels in a way that I truly loved. While it had its share of gore and gross, the story captivates the reader from the very first paragraph. Maybe it's the first person storytelling that pulled me in as a reader, but every step of the way I felt I was experiencing the story at the same time as the protagonist, Rick Summers. Bottom line, if you're tired of the same old, same old in your reading and want a story that will stay with you long after you've finished reading the last page and closed the book, Forever Will You Suffer will be that book. Rumor has it that Gary Frank will soon have a new novel out. Me, I'm waiting in line to buy it.
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