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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
The Idea...,
This review is from: The Game (Triple Crown Publications Presents) (Paperback)
The Good: "The Chosen One" by Destin Soul was one of the most clever stories out of this book. "The Letter" was hilarious. "Twisted" was a really good story as well. The line in Roy L. Pickering Jr.'s "Mama's Boy" about "Sometimes I think death is scared of me" was very strong dialogue and I liked that story.The Bad: It may be the editor in me, but some of these stories were almost impossible to get past the editing mistakes, or lack thereof, unless they were as well crafted as stories like "Averted Hearts" by John "Divine G" to the point where the plot outweighed the mistakes. But there were so many careless mistakes like "two ours" instead of "two hours", "you're" instead of "your", "Born" by Shere Washington had endless mistakes (and the story was so disturbing that I had to tell other people about it--the story was well crafted, but man, did it sit a heavy load on my brain!) In "Betrayal" by Chris Foster, you can't have a person speaking with exclamation points and say they have "emotionless demeanor" on top of the story being dry, practical, and too boring to finish. "Comradery" needed editing as well. Overall: "The Letter" was predictable, but I really liked it. Some stories were so far-fetched that it caught me by surprise. Only a couple were practical, which surprised me because i figured the subject matter was going to be. I really enjoyed this book and all the different aspects to it, but the editor needs to tighten up his/her game, for real because these are careless mistakes!
4 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Desperate Sales Attempt,
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This review is from: The Game (Triple Crown Publications Presents) (Paperback)
This book was a complete let down, the title of the book is completly misleading. A short story is just that a short story, but most of the stories in this book are more like book previews. It seems the purpose of this collection was to increase books sales for the various writers rather that provide interesting short stories. This was a complete waste of time, don't waste your money.
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
on the edge,
By glitter (St. Louis ,MO) - See all my reviews
This review is from: The Game (Triple Crown Publications Presents) (Paperback)
this book was a good collection of short stories. Some were to short, they left you hangin on the edge. This is a perfect book for people who cant sit thru long novel.
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