From Publishers Weekly
Despite uneven storytelling, this debut novel convincingly illustrates the gaps between the romance of the West and the realities of daily life on a struggling Kansas farm in the early 1880s. At 13, the narrator, Thomas, has already journeyed twice in a covered wagon-westward, from his maternal grandparents' home in Virginia, and then back east soon after, following the death of his mother. Raised by his grandparents, Thomas fantasizes about his father, imagining him as a cowboy, "the kind of man who would not be stuck inside reading The Pilgrim's Progress while dogwoods were blooming." His father, remarried and settled with stepchildren, invites Thomas and his sister, Becky, to come live with him, and while Becky chooses to stay at her academy, Thomas eagerly agrees. Seely homes in on the rigors of the prairie-the cramped farmhouse, the roughness of Thomas's task-minded stepmother, the constant chores (at which his younger step-siblings easily outshine him) and the hunger and privation. The narrative offers harsher examples, too (a toddler loses her way in the grass and dies). While Thomas has an engaging voice, some aspects of the plotting seem teacherly, as in the introduction of characters who mostly defy stereotypes (e.g., horsewomen and black cowboys), and in the dashing of Thomas's fancies when he is finally swept up in an actual cowboy adventure. And, unfortunately, the novel's resolution, in which Thomas reaffirms his love for the land, seems abrupt. Ages 10-14.
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From School Library Journal
Grade 5-8-Thomas has lived with his wealthy maternal grandparents in Virginia since his mother's death on the Kansas prairie. He has no real memory of his father, but he dreams about life out West with real buffalo, Buffalo Bill Cody, and Dick Deadeye. Now, years later, his father writes that he has remarried and wants his son to come and live with him. Thomas is disappointed and hurt by the lack of warmth in his new stepmother and her two children, and is unprepared for the unending, difficult chores. He toughens up through hard work behind a plow, danger with a rattler, the loss of his half brother, and adventures with a cattle stampede. By book's end, Thomas has matured into a young man with a new understanding of and appreciation for the beautiful but harsh prairie. With just enough whining, sibling jealousy, and confused emotions, the first-person narrative has the genuine voice of a 13-year-old boy. Mixing humor with hardship gives the story a balance that pulls readers on to the next chapter, knowing that Thomas will choose to stay with his father rather than return to Virginia. In using her great-grandfather as inspiration plus an excellent list of primary and secondary sources, the author has created a fine historical novel that will satisfy those curious about the 1880s, as well as those looking for adventure.-Carolyn Janssen, Children's Learning Center of the Public Library of Cincinnati and Hamilton County, OH
Copyright 2003 Reed Business Information, Inc.
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edition.