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Hanako and the Terror of Allegory, Vol. 1

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After seeing the preview in Deadman Wonderland Volume 1, I was really looking forward to "Hanako and the Terror of Allegory." After all, the series was being done by Esuno Sakae, the creator of Future Diary, which is a series I absolutely love, and the topic was Japanese folklore, which I love so much I got a Master's Degree in it. But unfortunately this first volume in the series just didn't deliver.

The story opens with Hiranuma Kanae, a young girl who is being hunted by "The Man under the Bed with an Axe." She knows that the story is nothing more than an urban legend, but her belief in it is so strong that it has manifested in reality. Through a rumor in an internet chat room, Kanae locates Aso Daisuke, the Allegory Detective. Daisuke specializes in cases like Kanae's in ridding the world of what he calls "Allegories," stories that have taken on a life of their own due to intense belief. Daisuke destroys the allegories by creating a situation where the believer is forced to confront the allegory, acknowledging that the allegory is nothing by a creation of the believer's subconscious, and that active disbelieve dispels the threat.

Kanae soon joins the staff, and Daisuke, Kanae and his assistant Hanako head off to tackle more allegory cases. There are three stories in this volume, all based on Japanese urban legends. The first one is "The Man under the Bed with an Axe," followed by the ubiquitous "Slit-Mouthed Woman" ("kuchisake onna") and finally the "Human-faced Fish" known as "jinmengyo" in Japanese which is a popular legend that pops up in the news from time to time.

All of that seems pretty cool, which is why I was looking forward to the comic so much, but there is just too much here that doesn't work.

To start off, "Hanako and the Terror of Allegory" is saddled with a really sub-par translation. I don't know if the translator, Yamashiita Satsuki, is a native speaker of English or not but the translation is really stilted and lacks fluency. The whole comic reads like the words were looked up individually then assembled with proper English grammar but without any emotion or sense of storytelling in English.

Next, the series doesn't quite commit one way or the other to being a supernatural comic or a high-tech comic. The "Hanako" in the title "Hanako and the Terror of Allegories" is an Allegory herself, specifically "Hanako-san in the Toilet," which is an urban myth similar to "Bloody Mary" ie if you repeat the spirit's name a proscribed number of times in the bathroom alone, the spirit will appear. However, aside from the backstory, this Hanako is a computer genius who spends her time making a "de-visualize program" for the allegories that strip them of their allegorical nature and allow the believers to see them for what they truly are.

At first I thought the series was going to be something like Fables, with the fairy-tale creatures being real, but instead the "de-visualize program" reveals that the allegories have no independent existence, and are nothing more than psychological projections of the believers. This forces the series to collapse under its own internal logic, because if Hanako is herself an allegory, wouldn't the "de-visualize program" destroy her as well? And as all of the rest of the allegories have some specific target, some human being with enough belief to cause them to manifest, who is manifesting Hanako?

And while I was familiar with all of these legends, they are very Japan-specific, and the text offers little explanation for new readers. While everyone might recognize or understand "The Man under the Bed" and there have been a few movies released for The Slit-Mouthed Woman, I highly doubt many Western readers would be familiar with "Hanako from the Toilet" or "The Human-faced Fish." There is a single page at the end of the book giving a short explanation of some of the myths, but it really isn't enough. A good translator will make endnotes to deal with some of the cultural ambiguities, but that doesn't happen here.

Maybe all of this will be fixed in future volumes, and I have learned not to give up on a series after the first volume. There are some nice Lovecraftian notes, especially with the "Human-faced fish" episode, and I always appreciate that. A new translator would definitely be the first order of business. However, as it stands there isn't so much to recommend for "Hanako and the Terror of Allegory."

Reason for Reading: Folklore and Japanese horror, couldn't pass up giving this one a try!

An allegory in this series refers to a story of the people, folklore, whether centuries old or a new urban legend that is popular and well-known but when certain people hear it they actually believe it for whatever reasons; it scares them, it touches their consciousness or their guilt. The the allegory becomes real and they are haunted/stalked by strange creatures. Daisuke Aso is an Allegory Detective, he's not fond of allegories, but since he is cursed by two himself, it makes him perfect for the job. Daisuke's allegories are that if he hiccups 100 times in a row he will die, unfortunately for him whenever he is in the presence of an allegory he starts to hiccup. His second curse is Hanako-san of the Bathroom, a technological whiz who pushes him to take the allegory cases and generally helps him out but is also a pain in the butt towards him. I can't tell if she is meant to be a little girl, or just significantly younger than the college age of the other characters. She's certainly not chibi. But from the way she talks she's not an innocent little child either.

This book covers three cases. "The Man with an Axe Under the Bed" and this story brings in the second main character, Kanae, who eventually stays on with Daisuke and works in his office helping him solve his cases. Then "The Slit Mouthed Woman" is an old Japanese folktale that is plaguing a young man and his new girlfriend and finally "Human-Faced Fish" which is slightly based on a hot news story that made the rounds once, But here it is much more eerie as a bus load of school children plunge into the ocean leaving only one survivor who is being haunted by the allegory of human-faced fish.

I really enjoyed this. Each story was like one of those old horror comics with it's own little mini-story but there is also an over arcing theme that keeps the three main characters together. Unfortunately there is quite a lot of s*x talk, and a bit of female nudity. The violence though is not over the top, more scary than bloody, which I think is the point here ... to scare. A fun, creepy read.

Many urban legends are meant to be scary. They're scarier when they come true.

Ever heard of the axe man urban legend? The man stays under someone's bed with an axe and kills them after they've fallen asleep. The axe man is under Kanae's bed and she can't let herself fall asleep. If she falls asleep, she'll die. She can't make him leave, either. So she goes to a special kind of detective agency in desperate need of help.

Aso Daisuke is a detective who likes to deal with nice, normal cases. However, he usually ends up dealing with supernatural problems instead. When urban legends start coming true for people, he says that they've been "possessed by an allegory." In other words, when people believe allegorical stories like urban legends enough, the allegory can become reality. After getting spooked by the tale of the axe man, Kanae now has an axe man under her bed.

Whenever Aso is close to the spirits of allegories, he starts to hiccup. That lets him know something is wrong. Hiccuping might sound like a minor annoyance, except for one thing. There's an urban legend that says if a person hiccups more than one hundred times in a row, they'll die. This will end up being true for Aso. So not only does he have to vanquish allegory spirits, he has to do it quickly in order to keep himself alive.

In gratitude for Aso's help with the axe man, and in order to pay off her debt, Kanae begins working at the detective agency. And more cases are always coming in. No matter how much Aso wishes he would get safe, normal cases, those pesky allegory keeps getting close to him.

The first volume deals with three urban legends--the axe man, the slit-mouthed woman, the human-faced fish--breaking off in the middle of a mystery to make readers want to pick up the next volume. Hanako and the Terror of Allegory is a fun, spooky read. It never gets too scary, but it likes to be creepy.

In terms of an audience, this manga gets an Older Teen or 16+ rating. It receives this rating for violence, nudity, and dirty jokes (like the ongoing cracks about Aso's collection of pornography). If anything, this will probably earn the book more readers.


As of now, Hanako and the Terror of Allegory promises more ghoulish tales and urban legends stalking people. Stories of horror will always have a certain fascination among people. In the future, it would be nice if Kanae became a stronger character and did more to stop the allegory spirits, rather than turn to Aso for help. But wherever Hanako ends up going, readers will be sure to follow.
-- Danica Davidson

(This is my first review on Amazon, but I'll get better)

First off, the main reason why I got this manga is because of the author. I am a big fan of Sakae Esuno's "Future Diary", so when I saw that this manga had the same creator, I was compelled to check it out.

However, before I went out to bought it, I read the first review, which mentioned this manga having a "bad translation" which instantly became a concern.


To those who may also be concerned by this, here's what I thought about the translation:

I checked out the manga for myself for a few pages, and it seemed fine to me. Yes, some of the dialogue does seem a bit bland, but I didn't really think of it as bad. It was very easy for me to overlook this, but then again it takes a lot to bother me.



Now onto reviewing the book (I'm going to keep this vague to spoil as little as possible):

The story is about a ero-manga-obsessed detective named Aso Daisuke; who appears to only deal with things like cheating spouses. It turns out that he also specializes in dealing with Japanese urban legends, particularly ones of horror.

This volume contains 3 different stories:
1. The Man Under the Bed
2. Slit Mouthed Woman
3. Human-Faced Fish

If you are unfamiliar with these stories, there is a brief description for each story near the end of the book.

The first case is about "The Man Under the Bed", which also introduces one of the main heroines: Kanae Hiranuma. It starts out with her being a client of Aso, asking him to investigate what she believed was a man hiding under her bed with an axe.

I'll just leave it at that, and hopefully you may want to go check it out yourself.

Oh, and I almost forgot to mention; there's some nudity near the end of the last story, just a heads up...


Things I liked:

- I appreciate new types of stories, and that's what this manga pretty much is (even though it's really a twist on multiple Japanese folklores). So if you're looking for something that's a bid out of the ordinary, check this one out.

- The last story did have me thinking for a bit, and hopefully it will make me think more in the next volume.

- I like the artist's style in "Future Diary", and this is pretty much identical in terms of how most of the characters look.

- I think the twist added to Hanako is actually pretty good.


Complaints:

- Some things are not explained, which is also mentioned in the first review: The name "Hanako" is also a Japanese urban legend, and it may confuse people who are unfamiliar with Japanese horror stories, but hopefully this doesn't affect the enjoyment of this book too much.

- This manga is considered "Horror/Mystery", but I wasn't frightened by this at all (but I wasn't expecting much anyways), and it doesn't take much to scare me. The only people who will most likely be frightened by this are younger children.

- Having the main character (Aso Daisuke) being obsessed with ero-manga seems as if it was added just so a few bits of humor could be added, but it didn't amuse me (I've already seen many characters like this in manga/anime). Not to mention the story would be fine (if not better) without it.



Summary:
I liked what I saw, and I'll be looking forward to the next volume.

If you're looking for something a bit different than other manga, give this one a try.



However, if I had to recommend this or "Future Diary", I'd definitely recommend the latter.