3.0 out of 5 stars
Interesting, But No Thumbs Up, May 25, 2011
This review is from: The Haven (Paperback)
The Haven is a book that did not not reach its true potential. The plot was intriguing, but ultimately I feel the book fell short.
There were simply too many characters to keep track of. While not as divers as GRR Martin's Song of Ice and Fire series, this book had more characters than needed. At least GRR Martin's gigantic books had enough pages and text to introduce and develope the characters of his world; such was not the case in The Haven. Thus we were left wanting for more.
Nigel and Desmond along with the wolf Hector lead a detachment of men and wolves thru the Northern Forest in search of a new world. While they toil thru this forest wilderness, the Haven must deal with vicious and intelligent dog beasts intent on invading the human domain. These dogs are animals that wish to tear humanity limb from limb. An army led by General Sean to deal with them is decimated in the Southern Forest, forcing humanity to retreat to safety behind the walls of The Haven.
The deaths of Lawrence and Antonius were contrived. Simply put, having them get lost in the "fog" was ridiculous.
Later in the book Diamond tells us about a battle but does not show the battle. He breaks a cardinal rule that authors are never supposed to break in that it is always better to "show" rather than "tell." I'm referring to a big battle between dogs and men that is given third person treatment. This was all the more frustrating because the rising action of the preceeding two chapters led us to the conclusion there would be a huge action-filled battle. There was none, which was a big let down.
The climactic battle at the end of the book was another contrivance that diluted the power of the book's ending. This book had great ideas but it ultimately fell short of establishing a hold on its reader. Despite the above flaws, I'm giving this book Three Stars. Diamond was on to something good here, and it looks like this was the foundaton of a series (Like The Hobbit Was To Lord Of The Rings). I read the second book in the series called the Dungeons of Kuba and was enthralled from beginning to end by that book; so I know that Graham Diamond can write--perhaps better than any Fantasy writer I've ever read. I assume this book The Haven was an abberation because the other books I've read were all Five Stars.
A. Nathaniel Wallace, Jr. My 60th Review!
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