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2.0 out of 5 stars
Huge Disappointment after the last book I'd read..., December 7, 2008
This review is from: Heat of the Knight (Paperback)
I've really debated whether to rate this one or two stars. While it didn't have some of the truly horrible things that I've seen in other books (such as rape), it did have some pretty awful things.
The only other Ivie book I've read is "Lady of the Knight" (guess, unlike SOME reviewers, I don't qualify as a TRUE "Ivie Fan"), and I enjoyed that a lot. I expected to enjoy this one, and for the first... quarter of it or so, I did. After that I just kept getting angrier with it.
Firstly, Lisle (said like "weasel"? They would have used that phrase back then, I'm sure) started out a strong (maybe a bit too prideful), reasponsible and determined woman. Within a couple of chapters she becomes a cowed woman who goes along with everyone else. She seems to be just along for the ride.
Langston had noble goals, we get it. But he didn't pursue them in a noble manner. He had an "ends justify the means" belief. That's not necessarily bad, but didn't endear him to me. His "noble" sacrifices, such as his first marriage and Saladin were tainted with his selfishness and how those "sacrifices" were really ends to his own means. His marriage in order to arrange a partnership with a slave-trader, and his "gift" of Saladin to engender himself with the Captain.
Langston set about to control Lisle from the very beginning, and the "trick" with the opiate in her bath was just obnoxious. Despite it not being what it seemed, he still had her being followed and jailed by her maids. How weak of mind and will WAS she to manage to be fooled by it?
As for Lisle, she became more and more TSTL thoughout the book. Her rafter climbing and spying just showed evidence of how little trust they had in eachother. Also the scene with the brazier emphasized just how little faith she had in merely his likelihood of not seriously injuring her! She found him hot, so as long as he showed any signs of even the slightest decency, she leapt at the chance to use them to justify "loving" him.
The sex scenes were okay. There were parts that felt almost word for word like Lady of the Knight, and, if not exact, awfully darn close. Oh, and of course the "he's so big, and it hurts so bad" kinda thing was there, too. *sigh* It wouldn't have gone amiss to have a couple more interludes, maybe a bit more lovingly done. The problem with that, though, is that it would imply that there WAS tenderness and love between them.
I think, though, that the most irritating facet of it all was that so little of the book came to a satisfying conclusion. The trip to France seemed to be an afterthought just to put in an historical figure. What happened with all the furniture? She never really even explained WHY he had all that furniture hanging from the ceiling! And either I don't recall it (unlikely), or they really didn't use all those complex and bizarre defenses that the castle had. 'Cause there wasn't really an ending to it, really. Which is a shame, because as we saw with her prior book, she's definitely able to write a climactic fight scene. The epilogue left me feeling no closure to the plot. It's as if Ms. Ivie just decided "I've written enough, I think I'll end it now."
I'm not "off" this author. I'm willing to read more. Heck, I'd buy her books just for the cover model! ;) But I'm sad that someone who writes SO well, who has such a great ability to bring life to characters and scenes, has wasted so much of her talent on a storyline and characters that were so unworthy of her.
I guess I'll stick with 2 stars on this, because she really IS a good writer. I simply couldn't develop an attachment to or an appreciation of the characters and their pursuits.
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4.0 out of 5 stars
Intriguing!, August 30, 2008
This review is from: Heat of the Knight (Paperback)
*semi spoiler* First, I would like to point out that although the Langston (the hero) uses slave trade as an explanation for his wealth, we learn that it is just posturing and that he doesn't engage in trafficking slaves.
Overall, this story was very very intriguing. I loved how the author didn't reveal the mystery surrounding the Monteith castle and Langston to the reader. We learned everything along with Lisle which kept me very interested and almost made the reader a part of Lisle's discovery and investigation. The story was intense to say the least but in a good way and I thought that the author kept the setting and the interactions between the H/H realistic to the time and place without compromising the romance. Ivie's descriptions were detailed, some might find them overly so. But for me it just brought to life the castle, the land and the life of the highlanders.
I loved the heroine, she was spirited but not in an obnoxious manner. I could understand her reactions to things, she was practical and just at times when i, if in her place, would maybe not have been, but there was so much else going on that to make stupid and irrational misunderstandings between H/H a point of contention in the novel would have ruined it for me. Luckily that did not happen, they moved past initial misunderstandings and the story became about discovery, emotional and physical. The hero was also a great package to unwrap. Mysterious, a bit tormented, afraid to open up but doesn't resist when love comes knocking, and not to mention a glorious body.
I would recommend getting it from the library, it may not be everyone's cup of tea but i certainly enjoyed it. It read a bit slow but ultimately the author did a good job of building the anticipation and drawing the reader in. I wanted to figure out the whole of the mystery and get to the end...but without skipping over a moment of everything else :).
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