4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
A long read, July 12, 2006
This review is from: Her Secret Life (Kimani Romance) (Mass Market Paperback)
As an avid lover of romance I find it easy to pick up a book and finish it in a couple of hours. Unfortunately this book did not sweep me away. The story was cool, but it was missing something. Sensuality it didn't have. But I also didn't like the hero. He was a Gamma male sometimes. There was nothign that drew me to him. I was not emotionally taken with this book. Some of the scenes were more technical than romantic. It was a cute story. I love the idea of living the double life, but I think it could have been alot better.
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Could have been better, September 25, 2006
This review is from: Her Secret Life (Kimani Romance) (Mass Market Paperback)
HER SECRET LIFE by Gwynne Forster
September 25, 2006
Rating 2.5/5 stars
I really hate giving out anything lower than 3 stars in a book review. In my opinion, if a book gets published, it's because it's readable, or enjoyable, or well written. I am giving HER SECRET LIFE a 2- 1/2 star rating. My problem with the book could be the type of book it is. The book had a lot of erotic sex scenes with explicit detail, which I'm not much of a fan of when I read romance novels. When I read a romance novel, I want romance, good characterization, great dialog that sounds REAL, not forced or fake. Unfortunately, this book didn't have too much going for it at all. While I "got" the main character, Jackie, and understood what motivated her (she worked two jobs to help pay for her father's health care), I did not care for the male counterpart, Warren. He seemed like a chauvinist pig, and while I'm not sure this was the author's intent, it seemed all he cared about was "having her in me".
Jackie worked days at an African American publishing company. She has a Ph.D. But at night she's a sleazy waitress at a gentlemen's club. She keeps her two worlds separate, and even her sister and father do not know she's working her butt off at this club. She meets Warren at the club and they have great chemistry. The rules are, however, that they cannot have a romantic or sexual relationship, as it's hands off or she could be fired. So they meet at a corner near work after she gets off at midnight, and they slowly get to know each other, if you know what I mean. The sex scenes are definitely hot and heavy, very descriptive, and while maybe this book was aimed for the erotica fan, I guess I didn't want my story to be all sex and not much romance. I think I would have liked the book better if the characters felt real to me, but they seemed stiff and forced. The dialog was definitely unrealistic and awkward. I did like Jackie's father, who seemed to be a very loving father who was mourning his wife, and was now ready to meet his maker. But overall, I just did not "feel" this book and it certainly didn't call to me. I was disappointed, as my first experience with Kimani was wonderful and so I'm not turned off by this line of books. HER SECRET LIFE could have been much better, even with all the sex scenes, if the characters were not cardboard cutouts and the dialog flowed a lot more realistically.
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7 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
High Hopes for Disappointment........, July 4, 2006
This review is from: Her Secret Life (Kimani Romance) (Mass Market Paperback)
I really loved and enjoyed Gwynne Forster earlier work, But lately I've been getting disappointed with her work.This book is good in some ways and others ways just not-what-I-was expecting in, being a
G.F. die hard fan. I won't lose the hope,but makes me apprehensive
about future purchasing .
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