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3.0 out of 5 stars
lacking in pirates, March 18, 2009
This review is from: High Seas Stowaway (Harlequin Historical) (Mass Market Paperback)
I picked up High Seas Stowaway because I was looking for something different and was intrigued by the setting. It starts out in 16th century Venice with our hero and heroine forging a fragile bond of friendship despite their disparate backgrounds. Balthazar Grattiano is the son of a wealthy and powerful lord, and Bianca Simonetti is the daughter of a lowly fortune teller. It all goes to pot once his father kills her mother. She flees Venice, and then the story cuts to seven years later to find her running a tavern in Santo Domingo, the seat of Spanish power in the New World. Thanks to happy coincidence, she's reunited with the hero, who in the intervening years has left behind his privileged life in Venice in order to make his name as the best navigator and ship's captain ever to sail the seven seas. (He's not a pirate, mind you. Just a ship's captain.)
Bianca still has the hots for Balthazar, but because of their history, she talks a lot about being his enemy and makes vague references to a desire for revenge. Her supposed hatred for him is never fully developed or articulated, however. Nor does the revenge plot progress far beyond Bianca mooning over Balthazar and jumping into bed with him pretty much instantly. This makes the constant reminders of the great abyss separating them and other such chasms as wide as the sea not only repetitive but annoyingly disingenuous and over exaggerated. The plot is also really improbable and kind of cobbled together, with a pseudo pirate who also wants revenge on Balthazar for something Balthazar never did. Far worse is Bianca's decision, in accordance with the title, to stow away on Balthazar's ship - without any clear purpose in mind. She mentions finding answers or settling a score or something, but it really seems like overblown dramatics, and an excuse for some more boinking.
Neither Bianca nor Balthazar have much depth to them. There's a lot of introspection, but neither character manages to go anywhere with their thoughts, which are stuck in a loop of clichés. Nor is there sufficient communication between them - Bianca's worry that Balthazar might have another family tucked away somewhere is particularly annoying and ridiculous. It would be easy to ask him, but she doesn't until very late in the story. Balthazar also whines a lot about how terrible he is because of his evil Grattiano blood. In a word, emo. He and Bianca spend most of their time trying to convince me of powerful emotions that aren't really there. And in the meantime, nothing really happens in this book. I was expecting a lot more action and adventure. I'm even more disappointed because McCabe writes pretty well. I like her descriptions of Venice, Santo Domingo, and the sea. Some images are really beautiful. I just wish that, with such readable prose, she could have told a better story. As it is, the book never manages to come together as nicely as it could have, considering its original premise. The back blurb advertises "pirates, passion and danger," but there's little of any of that to be found in High Seas Stowaway.
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2.0 out of 5 stars
A bit boring, March 10, 2009
This review is from: High Seas Stowaway (Harlequin Historical) (Mass Market Paperback)
Bianca Simonetti is the daughter of a Venetian fortuneteller. Her life in 16th century Venice is predictable until she meets Balthazar Grattiano, a handsome son of a powerful but violent man. Balthazar is beautiful and engages the services of many courtesans. He is a dreamer and wants to sail for uncharted territories. He likes the teen aged Bianca as a friend and enjoys sharing his dreams with her whenever his father calls upon the fortune teller.
Balthazar's father is viciously cruel and one day kills Bianca's mother when she tells a fortune not to his liking. Fearing for her life Bianca escapes vowing revenge on the Grattiano family.
Fast forward eight years and Bianca is a widowed tavern owner on a Caribbean Island. Who should walk into her tavern but Balthazar, who is now a ship captain. He is being hunted though by a ruthless man and a fight erupts that injures Balthazar and places him in the care of Bianca. She fights her feelings for him instantly and nurses him back to health. He remembers her from long ago.
When he leaves on his ship Bianca stows away. She does so because it just feels like the right thing to do even though she has no plan for vengeance and no real plan for a permanent station in his life. Together they must discover if what they share is real or just a holdover from a young love. Balthazar feels guilty for what his father has done but Bianca to her credit does not blame him for his father's actions. Also dogging this couple is the man who has targeted Balthazar for revenge.
This novel started out rather charming but within a few chapters became lackluster. Bianca's journey from Venice to the Caribbean was never fully explored. She was married to an older man but it appears that it made no real changes in her life other than transporting her to the other side of the world. When the leads reunite there was a bit of a spark but it soon died under the weight of uncertainty. Bianca didn't really know what she wanted from Balthazar and he seemed just as uncertain too.
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