2.0 out of 5 stars
(RAW Rating: 2.5) - What's In A Title, April 27, 2009
This review is from: Ho-9 (Paperback)
If the opening sentence of HO-9 is suppose to snatch reader's attention, then mission accomplished. ToCosha Scott is between jobs, and with her Associate's degree in Business Communication she wonders why she's not employed. A chance dialogue with a wrong number may be the connection ToCosha needs, she never knew a 1-800 Dial-up-Sex line brought in this kind of money.
The characters are plentiful and eclectic; street gangsters, political gangsters, a trio of hood chicks from Brooklyn, an elderly mother, two drug dealers facing life on Riker's Island, a wheelchair bound billionaire, and a gigolo. The question is what do these people have in common? The answer is the phone. No one really knows who is on the other end of the line, but they answer on the first ring, because phone sex never felt so powerful.
HO-9 is also about a dying woman's last wish to initiate reparations through her last will and testament. Charmaine Alexandria Fodder is trying desperately to leave her millions, treasures, and estate to African Americans and Native Americans whose land her founding family members stole. And HO-9 originators are hoping to claim some of the money.
Teela Winters-Eversis has written a piece of urban writing with the intent to leave readers breathless and hopeful, and from the first cuss word to the very last 'ho, baby,' I'm not sure if it accomplished that. I felt as if I were reading tangents of several lives, encompassing several different stories with graphic language for shock value. The premise of a story was there, but was pushed to the background as the name-dropping, metaphoric references and un-grammatically explicit sentence structure claimed the spotlight. Good editing would help the book immensely.
Reviewed by aNN
of The RAWSISTAZ(tm) Reviewers
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