From Publishers Weekly
In Friedman's humorous first novel, 13-year-old aspiring writer Jackie Monterey plans to spend his summer writing a novelAbut can't get past the opening line. It doesn't help that he keeps getting distracted: his pals Garus and Nick persuade him to join the swim team, then drag him along to hunt for a Playboy magazine or explore a sewer pipe; his best friend, Mallory, falls for a poetry-reciting member of the rival swim team; and when his "first-ever girlfriend" comes over for dinner, his New Age book publishing parents scare her off with their inedible soy-based menu and a bestselling author guest who recites an "ancient circle of prayers." After a few dozen attempts at film noir and science fiction, Jackie finally takes his dad's advice to "write what you know" and trades in his unfinished novels for an essay about his summer vacation, which he quickly cranks out, and it wins first prize in an essay competition. The book's funny moments and tender lessons occasionally get buried beneath stilted characters, such as Garus, who uses a forced English accent, or Mallory, who speaks in clunky abbreviations ("I'm s.h.i.c.e.a.h.," she says, meaning "I'm so hungry I could eat a horse"). But Friedman's comic timing along with her insights are what readers will remember. Ages 12-up. (June)
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From School Library Journal
Grade 5-9-Thirteen-year-old Jackie Monterey has vowed to write the great American novel this summer. He's certain he will succeed despite the fact that he didn't finish that short story last year or that essay the year before. Unfortunately, he can't seem to get past the first sentence. His parents, who run a New Age publishing house, are always distracting him with their strange friends and clients. His friends keep doing things that get them all in trouble and further distract him from his goal. It doesn't help that he keeps changing the genre of his novel from film noir to SF to western to humor. His parents offer advice, but they are too "weird" to know anything worthwhile. His best friend, Mallory, tells him he's too rigid. It takes his being dumped by his shallow first girlfriend, winning a swim meet, and seeing his parents in a new light to realize that Mallory was right. This amusing, entertaining book travels some of the same ground as Rob Thomas's Rats Saw God (S & S, 1996) without the depth and Jack Gantos's Jack's Black Book (Farrar, 1997) without the edgy humor. Some readers might become annoyed with Jackie's friend Nick, a lothario, or his sidekick Garus, who speaks with a fake British accent, but all in all the characters and situations are realistic and Jackie's awakening is believable if a little slow in coming.
Timothy Capehart, Leominster Public Library, MA Copyright 2000 Reed Business Information, Inc.