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If You Were My Man, March 12, 2010
This review is from: If You Were My Man (Paperback)
This book has a rich environment where the characters are richly formed. The story takes us on a journey where you know the foibles of the main characters. Nathalyia is a dynamo as the owner of the restaurant Fontaine. However, she has no social life. Is there a man that can compete or understand the life she has built for herself? Rafael Dunlap is a man who has come to a cross road in his life. Will he continue to be a love them and leave them kind of man? He is not the typical player by any means. It is just that unknown emotional hurts might stop him from claiming the woman he adores. These are the questions that this story answers. I also loved the interactions of the secondary characters. They are touching and sometimes humorous. Yes, these are the people that help kick our main characters in gear and in some cases get their own happily ever after.
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8 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Francis Ray At Her Finest!, March 13, 2010
This review is from: If You Were My Man (Paperback)
Nathalyia Fontaine only has time for Fontaine, the restaurant left to her by her late husband. So when sexy hostage negotiator Rafael Dunlap sets his eye on her, Rafael doesn't stand a chance. He also doesn't give up very easily. Rafael wears Nathalyia down until he wins her over. Their relationship was going great until something and someone from Nathalyia's past threatens to ruin it all. Nathalyia feels walking away is the only possible solution. That is until Rafael is injured in the line of duty. Nathalyia and Rafael both have to figure out if the love they share is worth fighting for.
If You Were My Man is a wonderful read. Francis Ray is a fantastic author. She has a writing style that is very natural and just flows without having lagging moments. Her characters and plots are always well developed. Ray has a way of making everything come to life. This time is no different!
Reviewed by Tenecia for Urban Reviews
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9 of 10 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Francis Ray - The Black Barbara Cartland, March 15, 2010
This review is from: If You Were My Man (Paperback)
Francis Ray does it again - Here is another feel good story that is almost Disney like in goodness and fantasy - No one does it better that Francis Ray. I enjoyed this story - Ms. Ray really developed the characters, however the plot ws once again too predictable: Two beautiful people, affluent, she is the virgin damsel in distress, he is the alpha male, good family, a bad guy and you have a story.
Honnestly, my favorites in the story were Jake and Clarice, the additional characters. I loved Jake and Clarice's interaction and I am glad they were present in this rather predictable story. Jake and Clarice made the story real.
No one does it beter than Francis Ray: for a 'clean' story that not 'Urban Fiction' and is like a fairy tale - this story is for you. I wanted Nat to be stronger, she had been thru so much - she came across as being too airy, too sheltered to be the successful dynamic business woman.
I have been reading Ms. Ray's books for years - She will always be one of my top favorites - I just wish I were her editor! :)
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