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  • File Size: 247 KB
  • Print Length: 99 pages
  • Publisher: Superluminal (January 5, 2014)
  • Publication Date: January 5, 2014
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B007SEN77Y
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  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #280,611 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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Scott's first novel, Mommy's Choice, was originally published in paperback under the pseudonym Scott Curtis. In under a year on the bookshelves, that novel won the Xulon Book Award for romantic suspense. When Scott moved to a different publisher and started making his novels available to Kindle readers, he returned to his real name and reduced the prices to the absolute minimum allowed by Amazon.
Scott McElhaney currently resides in Ohio with his wife and two sons. He still maintains a full-time job as a credit supervisor at Matco Tools Corporate Office where he has worked for over 16 years. Although his books didn't become available to Kindle readers until December 2011, over 200,000 digital copies have been purchased to date and he still maintains a position in the top 100 worldwide in the "Sci-fi Space Opera" category.

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23 of 25 people found the following review helpful By Sean Q. Ingle on June 2, 2012
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I wasn't going to write a review until I read the publishers note at the end of the book. Their philosophy of publishing ebooks at an ebook price is brilliant! Indentured is a quick paced, short novella. To a seasoned speculative fiction reader Indentured is a bit formulaic, predictable, and underdeveloped. The novella is perhaps a bit too short and too quickly paced, as the story seems to proceed at a rate much like that of a flip book. The overall effect is that of having skimmed through a much longer novel in too short a time. That said, the story was engaging, I want to know what happens next, and I am going to purchase the next novella in the series. What more can a person ask from a story? Best $.99 I've ever spent on Amazon.
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12 of 13 people found the following review helpful By Michael Gallagher HALL OF FAMETOP 50 REVIEWERVINE VOICE on May 31, 2012
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This is a short, and fun, little novella that will get you thinking of the "what if" moments if the technology were real: in this case, what would really be the case if you woke up as a cloned human and your memories are of yesterday being in reality a couple of hundred years in the past?

The author does a good job of sucking you into the moment and feeling as if you are the main character. The technology and scenarios are realistic enough for this sci fi fan and, if you like a good storyteller Mr. McElhaney knows how to do it. At 99 cents, this one is a bargain and I recommend it.
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful By Matthew Ashworth on July 2, 2012
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Indentured is one of those books that grips you from the very beginning and does not let go. In fact, the more you read, the more interesting it gets. I felt that it successfully mixed sci-fi with elements of mystery and thriller. The book is about a group of people from the 21st century who wake up on a spaceship many years into the future in bodies which do not belong to them and with no idea how they got there and what is needed of them from the crew of the ship. They are just told to obey, and whenever any one of them defects, they get severely punished. The story provided good twists along the way and kept going at a very nice, fast pace. Overall a great read and I am curious to know where it leads from here, so I am definitely going to check out further installments in the series.
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20 of 25 people found the following review helpful By William J. Wilson on April 30, 2012
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First, the good... The plot, the ideas, and the protagonist were all very interesting. The writing itself was clear and understandable. The overall length was acceptable for the selling price of 99 cents (i.e. It is short, but not egregiously so).

The pacing is odd throughout, almost as if the author was constantly accelerating to ensure he didn't exceed a wordcount target. By the end of the story, events were racing by. This became a real problem, as most of the plot twists happened later in the story. I had to re-read several passages, multiple times, to understand what was going on.

Characterizations were, in many cases, not very believable or not developed sufficiently. The Captain and Alpha were almost caricatures. The Ensign changed too quickly, and responded to situations very oddly. The protagonist's allies were barely developed, and some were just cardboard cutouts. The protagonist himself seemed to arrive at conclusions much too quickly based on insufficient evidence.

I wanted to like this one, but I had a hard time finishing it. I feel like this author might be capable of doing justice to this story, but doing so would probably increase the wordcount by 500%. As it stands, however, "Indentured" is not a very satisfying read.

One more thing... Another review compared this favorably to Joe Haldeman. Having just read "The Forever War" for the first time, and having read several new and first-time authors in the past month, I believe that comparison to be extremely flawed.

(After reading a few more ebooks from new authors, I would like to downgrade this review from two stars to just one. Unfortunately, I can't. Also, I really wish I could return this and get a refund.)
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6 of 7 people found the following review helpful By Todd a on June 10, 2012
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This book starts off ok. It takes a couple surprising turns, and was entertaining. Then everything falls apart in the few last chapters and the author fails miserably with the ending. It's not that I thought the ending should have been different, it's just so poorly executed, it brings my rating of the book from 4 stars to 2.

The author fails basic storytelling 101 and forgets to explain the "why" behind the whole situation. The motivation behind the antags' actions are never explained. Then to make it worse, the protags and antags wind up in a flimsy stalemate situation and is resolved with a cliche, "can't we all just get along" solution. The ending is lazy, sloppy, and unimaginative and ruins an otherwise entertaining read.

Also, don't let the price fool you, this isn't a full length novel, more of a novella.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful By Simonewrites on May 8, 2012
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"Indentured" has very interesting likable characters and a believable premise for waking up in the future. I read this book in an afternoon and immediately bought "Legacy" which picks up the tale that was set up in "Indentured" with brand new characters. Now I'm very anxiously awaiting the 3rd book due out in July! I enjoyed the first 2 books immensely. The science behind waking up in the future and time distortion during space-travel was described in a believable way without getting too fussy with the specifics.

I felt that the characters could use a bit more fleshing out and the relationships and social backdrops could have been a bit more complicated. There were also a couple of minor grammatical errors that more careful editing could have easily corrected. That being said, I plan on buying the next book as soon as it's available.

Well done!

Indentured (The Mystic Saga),Legacy (The Mystic Saga)
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