Many YA novels about rape, such as Laurie Halse Anderson's Speak (1999), have shown the horror and pain from the victim's perspective, but Lynch's daring story is told in the defensive voice of the accused rapist. In chapters that move between the rape scene and the past, Keir tries to convince readers of his own innocence and earn their trust: "I'm going to tell you the truth," he says early on. "You could ask pretty much anybody and they will tell you. Rock solid, Keir. Kind of guy you want behind you . . . Loyal, polite. Funny. Good manners. He was brought up right, that boy was."
Attempting to defend his character with anecdotes from his senior year of high school, Keir relates a string of disturbing, morally ambiguous stories in an energetic voice that's alternately playful, earnest, rational, and, as almost all readers will recognize, deluded. Many stories involve Keir's football team, including an on-field accident in which Keir cripples a receiver during a routine play and releases himself from blame. When Keir joins his teammates in violent year-end hazing and vandalism, and then watches a videotape of their actions, he struggles to reconcile the reality of himself and his friends as frightening aggressors with the "lovable rogues" he has imagined.
His rationalizations, his response to so many incidents, convince readers that they are listening to an unreliable narrator, a sense that only increases as the story progresses, returning frequently to the rape scene, and Gigi's furious and clear accusation: "You raped me." In one of the many remarks directed straight to readers, Keir says, "I'm lying. I said I wouldn't do that to you, but I am," which simultaneously undermines his credibility and draws him closer to his audience, creating an uncomfortable intimacy that Lynch masterfully balances throughout the novel.
Through expertly drawn, subtle, every-guy details, Lynch creates a nuanced, wholly believable character that will leave many readers shaking with recognition: They know this guy, a strong athlete who fleetingly struggles with his self image, loves (and is disappointed by) his family, wants to have fun with his friends, and has a deep crush on a girl. His very familiarity, combined with his slippery morality, violent actions, and shocking self-denial, will prompt many readers to question themselves, and their own decisions and accepted ways of talking and behaving with each other.
Teens may doubt Keir's reliability as a narrator, but his self-recognition, in a final, searing scene, rings true. Here, and throughout this unforgettable novel, Lynch raises fierce, painful questions about athletic culture, family denial, violence, and rape, and readers will want to think and talk about them all. Where does personal responsibility begin? What defines a "good guy"? Are we all capable of monstrous things? Gillian Engberg
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As far as a professional opinion goes on the writing and narration of this book, you can look to other reviews. Read morePublished 1 month ago by T. Yates
This book was so difficult to read. I felt like the author was just rambling all over the place. It was so repetitive, I found my mind drifting off while I was reading. Read morePublished 13 months ago by Margie
Keir Sarafian is a good guy. He’s a talented football player with a lot of friends and a scholarship to a good school and would never do anything to hurt the girl he loves. Read morePublished 13 months ago by Miss Riki
Keir views himself as a good guy. He gets scholarships, plays ball, is a son to a widower, is a brother to two older sisters...an all-around good guy. Read morePublished on November 11, 2012 by Sharif
I was assigned to read this book for my Human Sexuality class. I hated it. I couldn't get over the fact that I'm pretty sure Keir/Kier (I can't remember) is really mentally... Read morePublished on August 5, 2011 by Amazon Customer
An important subject to be discussed, Inexcusable looks at rape from the rapists point of view.
Told primarily through flashbacks after the rape the story focuses on... Read more
I've seen this book recommended as a companion novel to Laurie Halse Anderson's "Speak" and really, the main character of "Inexcusable," Keir, could have easily been IT. Read morePublished on November 20, 2010 by YA book lover
This was a book that sounded so good, and it just didn't live up to my expectations. From page 1, readers learn about Keir and all the things he's done where he procedes to tell... Read morePublished on September 12, 2010 by Erica
While following Keir Sarafian through the days of playing RISK around with his dad, Keir slowly found impatience with the love of his life Gigi Boudakian, who was already in love... Read morePublished on October 28, 2009 by Travis R. Boxford