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1.0 out of 5 stars
This deserves 0 stars!, April 14, 2008
This review is from: The Invasion of Falgannon Isle (The Sisters of Colford Hall, Book 1) (Mass Market Paperback)
I bought this book full of anticipation but was sorely disappointed. The author tries to be especially cute in her writing style, with all the capital letters, 'The Cat Dudley' - the result is just simply annoying. Besides this, the style is very clumsy and the book is not well written at all.
My greatest problem with this book, however, is the author's completely wrong and inappropriate use of Gaelic words. As a Gaelic speaker myself, this is grating. Such sloppy research is not necessary when there are plenty of Gaelic scholars around. What the author seems to have done is pick the first available word out of a dictionary - and how wrong that can be I don't need to tell you.
Then, there are the Pictish references. Again, incredibly annoying. I don't mind fantasy books, but this book is obviously not meant to be fantasy with the creation of a new world/race. All we know of the Picts is what they have engraved on a few stones - pictures that nobody has yet been able to interpret. Mind you, having looked at the author's website, it becomes clear that she has a very strange understanding of Scottish history. According to her, the Picts were on Lewis! Oh dear!
Hmm, to the discerning Celtic scholar, drawing certain vague parallels to Miss Goodrich-Freer may not be entirely out of the question... How do I back this up? I am friends with the archivist of Canna House; and all those who are able to state that Ms MacGillivray is such an expert on all things Scottish and Gaelic will of course be aware of the importance of Canna House... or not???
Altogether - if I could have given this book 0 stars, I would have.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Wasted read and series, August 1, 2010
This review is from: The Invasion of Falgannon Isle (The Sisters of Colford Hall, Book 1) (Mass Market Paperback)
This book, along with the other 2 in the series, A Wolf in Wolf's Clothing and Riding the Thunder, make women look stupid and gullible. The "heros" are liers, lacking morals and scrupples in their personal lives and business dealings. That the sisters forgive them with little or no argument or concern, having the "I don't care what he does-I love him" attitude, reinforces the idea that women are just ruled by their emotions and whatever the men they love do or say is ok as long as "I love you" is somewhere in the mix. Women are too dumb to know better anyway. I will not read anymore books by this author.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Weak plot development. Mostly about everyday activities and conversations among people on the island., December 23, 2009
This review is from: The Invasion of Falgannon Isle (The Sisters of Colford Hall, Book 1) (Mass Market Paperback)
STORY BRIEF:
Long ago, a curse was put on Falgannon Isle. (1) No females would be born to the females of the island and (2) the males of the island would not find love until the Lady of the Isle mated with an Irish man with black hair and green eyes. The curse even applies to men and women who leave the island. BA (BarbaraAnne) is the current Lady of the Isle. She is a descendant of Maeve (the woman who was cursed). She inherited wealth created by her grandfather Sean. She uses her wealth to improve the lives of the men on the island. Recently she set up a matchmaking website inviting single women to come to the island. She pays their expenses to come meet potential husbands. Desmond is of Irish descent and has black hair and green eyes. He comes to the island with plans to build a resort. He also has other motives which could hurt BA. He and BA are lustfully drawn to each other.
REVIEWER'S OPINION:
The plot was weak. It seemed most of the story consisted of everyday activities and conversations among the people living on the island. The author used a lot of cute names and references to celebrities and movies which is fine, but I would have preferred more interesting actions, motivations and events. I lost interest and wanted it to be over. I found myself skimming some parts in the middle of the book. The main plot about Desmond's business plan which could hurt BA was not developed. And at the end, details about what happened with the business issues were never explained. I wanted the details. The sex scenes were ok but could have used a little more emotional draw.
The best parts of the story (which surprised me) were BA's actions after she learned about Desmond's plans.
DATA:
Story length: 341 pages. Swearing language: mild. Sexual language: mild. Number of sex scenes: 8. Total number of sex scene pages: 18. Setting: current day Falgannon Isle, off the coast of Scotland and Ireland. Copyright; 2006. Genre: contemporary fantasy romance.
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