- File Size: 701 KB
- Print Length: 360 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: April 9, 2013
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00CAWDQZ2
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #920,253 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
Invincible (A Centennial City Novel) Kindle Edition
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However, and it's a BIG however, the many, many mistakes caused the story to grind to a jarring halt over and over again. Some were little, like homonym errors, and some were words that were CLOSE to what they mean (i.e., "he will LOPE the head from your shoulders"). Far worse where the passages that made no sense at all. For example, "Vampires are strong. They are strong like a bear is dangerous. Strength-wise, they are strong..." Reminds me of a recent news headline, "Man Killed to Death." Just awkward.
Also troubling is the heroine's shifting points of view. You get that Ran's fiercely loyal to her Fellowship and never questions her duty. She's very repectful and proper. Until this story. She suddenly goes off on her own, for reasons she can't explain to herself (but might have to do with the fact that the sort-of hero is "beautiful."). She ignores a direct order to return to base. She becomes a wise ass. She allows others to influence her thinking. It didn't jibe with what we know of her so far. A beautiful man smiles at you, and your granite heart melts to goo and all your kick-assery goes down the tubes. And sometimes, the character's conversations were awkward and made little sense.
Lastly, and this just might be me, but has anyone noticed a trend in books featuring kick-ass heroines who kick-assedly kill vicious monsters, have reputations as the most skilled fighters around, but then are easily defeated in the fights they're in now? WTF?Read more ›
Most Recent Customer Reviews
There's so much adventure and action in this story. Ran is put to the test when she's given her lone job. She's spent her entire life living up to what's expected of her. Read morePublished 9 months ago by cateyes
I liked it a little bit but what would have been better is romance and less blood in it .Published on September 1, 2013 by Kindle Customer