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Invincible (A Centennial City Novel) Kindle Edition

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Length: 360 pages Word Wise: Enabled Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled

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  • File Size: 701 KB
  • Print Length: 360 pages
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Publication Date: April 9, 2013
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B00CAWDQZ2
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Word Wise: Enabled
  • Lending: Enabled
  • Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #735,162 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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Originally from the sunny shores of Southern California, Fionn has made her home in various places around the world and currently resides near the world-famous West Lake in Hangzhou, China. First published in 2007, she's an avid snowboarder, rock star wannabe and draws in her free time.

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4 of 5 people found the following review helpful By Shirley U Jest on April 21, 2013
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I began this story interested in the emotionally-damaged, Ninja-like assassin heroine, Ran. The storyline and world was plausible, and the heroine's rather stilted narrative I found sort of charming, as though English was not her first language, and she was used to thinking and expressing herself rather formally.

However, and it's a BIG however, the many, many mistakes caused the story to grind to a jarring halt over and over again. Some were little, like homonym errors, and some were words that were CLOSE to what they mean (i.e., "he will LOPE the head from your shoulders"). Far worse where the passages that made no sense at all. For example, "Vampires are strong. They are strong like a bear is dangerous. Strength-wise, they are strong..." Reminds me of a recent news headline, "Man Killed to Death." Just awkward.

Also troubling is the heroine's shifting points of view. You get that Ran's fiercely loyal to her Fellowship and never questions her duty. She's very repectful and proper. Until this story. She suddenly goes off on her own, for reasons she can't explain to herself (but might have to do with the fact that the sort-of hero is "beautiful."). She ignores a direct order to return to base. She becomes a wise ass. She allows others to influence her thinking. It didn't jibe with what we know of her so far. A beautiful man smiles at you, and your granite heart melts to goo and all your kick-assery goes down the tubes. And sometimes, the character's conversations were awkward and made little sense.

Lastly, and this just might be me, but has anyone noticed a trend in books featuring kick-ass heroines who kick-assedly kill vicious monsters, have reputations as the most skilled fighters around, but then are easily defeated in the fights they're in now? WTF?
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful By Amazon Customer on August 30, 2013
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Won copy of this book thru LibraryThing:The title for this book brought to mind many questions about being invincible. What would you do for this strength? What would you risk to be invincible? Who would you trust knowing you're invincible? To be perfectly honest I thought the author did an awesome job using honor as mantra and exploring different kind of vampire lore. I thought the characters were honest, emotional, mysterious, and dramatic. I will definitely look forward to more of this author's work.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful By Deborah Botelho on May 14, 2013
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The book was a good read. Different storyline and had me guess throughout the book. The ending however, felt a bit rushed and left me wanting more.
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