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1.0 out of 5 stars
Iron Tree? More like deadwood.., June 20, 2005
This review is from: The Iron Tree: Book One of The Crowthistle Chronicles (Hardcover)
I must admit that I picked up this book after choosing to ignore the critiques below, which I felt must surely be a little harsh. The scope for an epic, involving fantasy tale seemed intriguing from the book's publicity.
Sadly, I can only confirm what others are saying. This writer desperately needs a ruthless front-line editor to excise the deluges of description that completely sink this story. The author clearly lacks the restraint to rein herself in and evidently needs help to do so. Either a decent editor or back to writing classes, I'm afraid, because this material wouldn't pass muster on an average writing workshop.
I'd like to be able to say something positive, but I'm afraid I can only sympathize with readers who have spent money to buy this book and also for the unfortunate publishers who appear to have a bomb of a trilogy to market now. One to avoid, I fear.
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19 of 19 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Umm..., June 13, 2005
This review is from: The Iron Tree: Book One of The Crowthistle Chronicles (Hardcover)
Wow. This was horrible. I don't say that often, but it was true. The publisher let this out? And worse, she's been compared to Tolkien? No. Apparantly it wasn't just me either (man I wish I had checked out the reviews before getting this), except Harriet Klausner, but its not like she's reading any of these books anyway, and her opinion just cements that.
First of all, there are so many ridiculous lists of things that don't matter. I really don't care about all the fifty types of plants that come to the desert after the rains, sorry. And my lord, the decription. If I hear about how Lilith's lips are like petals one more time, I'll vomit. Some description is good, but geez, there's a thing called balance. I've never in my life seen someone go so overboard on description.
There was a glimmer of an interesting story underneath, which is a shame since it drowned underneath the descriptive swamp of this book. But apparantly the author wanted to have a "Shakespearean" twist to it. Darling, it doesn't work when you write in that style for the narrative, and no one will believe it when you're characters only stick to that style of speaking occasionally with no apparant pattern. Not to mention the fact that her two main characters could be gods for the lack of faults that they have (well, except the one goes nuts, but not for long), and their romance was so incredibly lame I was yearning for a Jennifer Lopez movie for something more realistic.
Please do not even bother. Maybe you can try it in paperback, but be warned, this book is really that bad.
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26 of 31 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
And the moral of the story? Don't judge a book by its cover!, June 20, 2005
This review is from: The Iron Tree: Book One of The Crowthistle Chronicles (Hardcover)
One star for the pretty cover, the other for the quality!
Okay, I admit it- I judge a book by its cover. And maybe I've really learned a lesson about doing that this time. I bought it right when it came out, and man do I wish I had waited for some reviews to show up and the price to be cut in half before buying this horrible volume.
The Iron Tree starts out disappointingly, and predictably, ends disappointingly. The plot is nothing that special, and in fact, I found it quite generic. I wouldn't even have finished this if I hadn't kept waiting for the high point- which, to save you the anticipation, never appears in all the 400 pages. The book is crammed with useless tidbits that have no relevance whatsoever to the story, and it took me forever to finish it. And I must say, I found it rather offensive and mildly blasphemous that the author had to steal Celtic language and culture (druids, etc) and plop it into a landscape she made up. Is Ireland not good enough for her? Or couldn't she have tried a little harder and come up with something more her own? Okay guys, if at this point you're ready to start a Get-This-Sucky-Book-Out-Of-Print-And-Stop-The-Second-Crowthistle-Chronicle-Before-It-Happens Club, please feel free to contact me and we'll have to set something up.
At the end of this book, the narrator speaks to us and apologizes for any grief the story might have caused in its readers. I had to snort at something this presumptuous. Now let's set this straight: if I had cried at the end, I'm pretty sure it would have been because of the sudden realization that I had wasted time and money rather than by any sudden wave of emotion. Does this author qualify herself among Marion Zimmer Bradley and Juliet Marillier? If you want a good read, pick up something by either of them. But by all means, leave this book alone. If for no other reason, then do it for the rainforest.
Usually when I write negative reviews, I feel a tad bit bad about it because I might be causing the writer to lose business. Of course I don't do it undeservingly, but if I didn't write this, I would feel awful about the people wasting their money on such a horrendous piece of work.
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