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5.0 out of 5 stars
A Love Song To Experience, July 21, 2008
This review is from: J-Pop Love Song (Paperback)
Shiree McCarver brings readers a very interesting story of romance in J-Pop Love Song. Charlene Alfred is about to embark on a new career. She is already a successful songwriter and best-selling romance author. Her first book, Blu's Diary, is being made into a motion picture and she is in the middle of screening actors for the lead male role. However, the financial backers have already decided who would have the role, Japanese pop star, Kane. Kane is young, sexy and perfect for the role. But Charlene believes he is too young and inexperienced to portray Blu's true character.
Kane has been performing on the stage since the age of 12. Eager to get from under the thumb of his manager/mentor, Takusa, Kane would do almost anything to be a part of this film. There is also something about Charlene that has been haunting him since he was 16 years old and he read her book. After convincing Charlene to come to Japan to meet him in person, Kane realizes that he is in love with her and he sets out to win her heart.
Set in Tokyo, McCarver introduces readers to Japanese culture. This story is about an African American woman and Japanese Man. It is about an older woman and a younger man. It is about western cultures mixing with eastern cultures. It is about forbidden love. It is about secrets and traditions and so much more. McCarver packed a lot in 280 pages but it was well worth reading. I cheered and cried with Charlene and Kane as they discovered their love for each other and struggled with secrets that tried to keep them apart. McCarver did an excellent job of explaining the culture and language for readers. This book is recommended for book clubs that are looking for a different type of romance that will spark plenty of discussion.
Reviewed by: Priscilla C. Johnson
APOOO BookClub
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Author offering free ebook edit copy on website, May 17, 2011
I apologize for the error filled copy of this book that continues to haunt me. The final proofed copy of this book was not the one that was published. I told them that from the beginning after get two boxes of error filled books that are still in my closet. You can download a free better edited e-copy of this book from a link on my website. The publisher refuses to do anything about this so I had someone to reproof it. If you didn't like the story in general there is no reason to bother because the story itself has not changed. If you have a problem with the use of simplified Japanese because you're more adverse in the language don't bother, because though I am learning I am flawed. If you demand complete perfection in your read, you will not find it here because I can't afford the editing staff that publishers have. If you don't like my style of writing or long dialog reads, don't bother that will not ever change either. Also I can't do anything about replacing the paperback copies. That's on the publisher who I've been trying to get to rectify this problem for going on 3 years. I can do nothing but acknowlege your dissapointment and apologize from the bottom of my heart for this is a story that I was and still am very proud to be the author of.
Sincerly,
Shiree McCarver
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Poor book editing, otherwise an intriguing premise for a love story, December 28, 2008
This review is from: J-Pop Love Song (Paperback)
First, I have to say that as I'm writing this, I am not currently finished with this book. Perhaps once I am, I can write a more fully-rounded review of the story itself. That said, and before anyone criticizes me for reviewing this on what seems to be a premature note, I am frankly wondering if anyone edited this book before it went to press. I am having a difficult time enjoying the nuances of the plot, simply because of the poor grammar, tense usage and punctuation issues that continually riddle this book as I'm reading it, which is why I'm writing this review now. I'm sorry to sound as if this overshadows anything else about this book, but it's annoying to have to reread a sentence simply because punctuation placed where it doesn't belong, or not placed where it does, renders it senseless.
That said, as a writer myself, as well as being a nearly forty year old Japanese-American who's very much a fangirl of Gackt and Hyde (two of the influences Ms. McCarver cited in her dedication at the beginning of the book), I can definitely relate to aspects of this plotline. I first saw this book advertised in an issue of Romantic Times magazine, and was intrigued because I've long searched high and low for contemporary romance among Asian people, and more specifically, Japanese people. I agree with the male love interest, Japanese pop star Kane, who says that Japanese men are horribly steriotyped. (For more on Asian steriotyping, check out
The Asian Mystique: Dragon Ladies, Geisha Girls, & Our Fantasies of the Exotic Orient) I'm hoping as I go along that Ms. McCarver manages to banish said steriotypes and creates what promises to be a wonderful love story.
That is, however, if I can attempt to ignore the glaringly obvious lack of editing. Thank you, though, to Ms. McCarver, for writing an entire novel in which my culture and my people are prominent.
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