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3.0 out of 5 stars
This book left me wondering only how it got published., July 24, 2001
This review is from: The Last Buffalo Hunter: A Novel (Hardcover)
Trust me. I'm being kind with the 3 Star review.
This is a book that began strong. The writing is vivid. The characters are familiar and, and the setting is seductive. For the first 50 to 100 pages, I thought I was going to thoroughly enjoy this story (hence the third star), but that was before I realized that the author had no idea where it was going.
To say that the main characters in this book are cliché gives new meaning and intensity to the word cliché. The characters quickly degenerated from being interesting to being ridiculous.
A 14 year old boy is sent by his otherwise responsible parents by bus from their home in upstate New York to visit his Grandfather in Montana for the summer. If you've ever had a 14 year old boy you know that this in itself is suspect. He reaches Montana and is finally met by his Grandfather WHO IS John Wayne in the role of Rooster Cockburn. Following in the footsteps of all good Grandpas, Cole (Rooster) teaches the boy to fly fish the local rivers, drink beer and whisky, have sex with the Indians, and shoot at the local police when they come to arrest him for the destruction of another man's property. No kidding.
To his credit as a Grandpa, Cole/Rooster also passes on a bit of family history to the boy (which he never saw fit to share with his own son for no good reason, in the form of a leather-bound diary, written by the boy's Great Great Grandfather. The diary was written as this pioneer made his way West, alone, during the 1860s to settle in Montana. This character is both cliché and not believable. He IS Robert Redford in the role of Jeremiah Johnson ("Liver Eatin' Johnston), complete with the character of Bear Claw Chris Lapp, who saves him before he dies from exposure. He later becomes Kevin Kostner in the role of "Dances With Wolves", complete with his tribal bride and the Medicine Man who predicts the extermination of the Indian people by the oncoming hordes of whites. I kid you not. But this character is also not believable because even as he is dying of exhaustion, sunburn, and starvation and is brought down to such a condition that travel means pulling himself across the prairie by his fingertips, he stops to write in his journal with the proficiency of a literary master. GIMME A BREAK! Even his horse had died of thirst at this point.
This book is chock full of good Indians who have been abused by the evil white man and of course most of these Indians have incredible mystical powers. What else? Heck, I was engaged to an Apache girl for years and if she had any mystical powers she surely never let me see them. I guess she was the exception to that rule.
The book was complete with the old western scene of the cowboy who dies, gets up and dies again, and then does it again and again ad nauseum too. At one point, Grandpa Cole, who fis always near death from having inhaled too much coal dust in his younger years, rips the oxygen tubes out of his nose while he is dying in the hospital, is carried out of the hospital so that he can man a canoe and shoot the most dangerous rapids in Montana and he dies in the canoe with his head under water, only to resurface at the end of the ride strong of body and of voice, and immediately go jogging through the woods!
But it was the last few pages of the book that really took the cake. At this point, Grandpa Rooster Cockburn Cole grabs an old Sharps rifle and heads on to a neighbor's property intent upon killing the neighbor's entire herd of bison, which he does. The last Bison left standing is ol' Splinter Horn, the biggest, meanest bull this side o' Hell. The bull charges, Cole squeezes the trigger on the Sharps, the old rifle, which had belonged to his "Dances with Wolves" Grandfather, explodes in his hands, sending the bullet into the bison. But before the Bison dies, Cole/Rooster is transformed into, of ALL literary characters, Captain Ahab, as he rides off into the woods on Splinter Horn / Moby Dick's horns, never to be seen again.
Again, three stars is generous. Bear in mind that I did not deduct points for one of the worst editing jobs I have ever encountered in a published book. The book is full of typos, like the one on page 202, 6th line down: "...and handed my his razor,..." and the one on page 235, 23rd line down: "...to shot dozens of imaginary arrows at me". At the end, the publisher tells us about the fancy type setting job he did for the book, which led me to wonder if he was too busy setting type to have someone check the book for annoying typographical errors.
If you want to read a much better book of this type, check out Vardis Fischer's "Mountain Man".
Sorry, but if this book will teach its reader anything it is that you too can get a novel published.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Wonderful first novel, wonderful novel period!, September 10, 2001
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This review is from: The Last Buffalo Hunter: A Novel (Hardcover)
The Last Buffalo Hunter is the first book I've read in many, many years that is set in a "real" Montana. There isn't any of the glossed-over Hollywood imagery that so often accompanies anything to do with Montana these days. This novel is about the raw, hard sides of life not just in the west but everywhere else. It's sharp, compelling, and through a set of well-developed, unique characters tells a gripping story of love, loss, adventure and understanding. It weaves legend into contemporary life, using touches of magic realism without becoming a fantasy. It left me feeling haunted and at the same time satisfied. There is no doubt that The Last Buffalo Hunter is a remarkable accomplishment, more so because it is the writer's first novel. I am anxiously awaiting a second book from Jake Mosher and a third, fourth, fifth, ect. This is one read you won't regret!
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
The Mosher Genes Have Flowered, April 6, 2002
This review is from: The Last Buffalo Hunter: A Novel (Hardcover)
I absolutely loved this book.
The son of the renowned raconteur of the Northeast Kingdom, Howard Mosher and his wife Phyllis, first time novelist Jake Mosher has planted his boot heels high in the wilds of Mantana and stomped himself a foothold. The Last Buffalo Hunter tells the sory of 14 year-old Kyle Richards and his wild and wooly coming of age during a summer spent with his proud and profane grandfather, Cole, in the Big Sky country of Montana. Cole is a rugged logger and former broncobuster, as quick to throw a punch, as he is to pull a gun. Womanizing, whiskey drinking, Kyle's grandpa is a profane throwback to an era that has all but faded away, but ruggedly holds on like the last traces of ice along a high mountain trail in summer.
A wonderful cast of characters ramble through the book, including a cute young Indian girl who has cast her eye on a bewildered Kyle. Hucksters, dudes, unreformed Indians, and a barroom of hard drinking, hard loving men and women, hoisting shots together in drunken, fight filled nights. In the background lurks the long running fued with millionaire developer Bruce Tipton and his herd of buffalo that surround Cole Richards home. Encroaching daily, smothering him, and his stubborn view of what's really right and wrong, building to a showdown that seems as inevitable as so-called progress and development.
A journal Kyle finds of his great-grandfather's arduous journey from Kansas City to Montana in 1862 flows like a winding mountain stream through this book occasionally. The dusty journal brings to life the terrible ordeal of moving west, and gives this marvelous book a mystical quality at times. A mystical quality as ominous as the howling of the ghostly black wolf that seems to know every step Kyle takes high in the mountains at night, and the yellow hate-filled stare of the fenced-in buffallo bull, Splinter Horn. Jake Mosher wites about the West, it's history, it's people, and it's scenery with a skill well beyond his young years. The Mosher genes are truly flowering.
As I reluctantly turned the last page of this book, I sighed contentedly, but sad that it was over. I had been in the hands of a master stryteller, a craftsman of words. I knew that Kyle's summer in Montan would remain fondly in my memory as much as it would by the young grandson of Cole Richards.
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