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5.0 out of 5 stars
What a fantasy should be, September 21, 2004
Claire Dunkle makes a smashing debut with "The Hollow Kingdom," a look at those old legends about maidens being kidnapped by goblins. Dunkle has a wonderful flair for storytelling -- she gives you suspense, creeps, humor and romance, all entwined in a wonderfully surreal storyline.
Kate and Emily are recent orphans, sent to the estate of Hallow Hill to live with their sour-faced guardian Hugh. Soon after they arrive, the girls become lost in the woods -- and encounter goblins posing as gypsies. Kate finds that she is being singled out by the goblin king Marak to be his bride. The goblin kings always kidnap human girls to be their wives, and since Marak's mad wife has died, he wants a new queen to produce an heir for him.
At first, Kate resists Marak as he tries to kidnap her. But Hugh tricks Kate into walking down into Marak's realm and surrendering herself to be his wife, and Emily comes with her. At first Kate is miserable and homesick, since she is destined to remain underground for the rest of her life. But the goblins are falling prey to evil sorcery, which binds them in sleep, and threatens the whole hollow kingdom...
"Hollow Kingdom" is pretty much everything a fantasy should be -- fantastical, well-plotted, and with a well-created alternate world. Not to mention the goblins themselves. Dunkle has obviously thought out a lot of detailed history about elves, dwarves, and goblins, while carefully linking them with old legends. And she actually makes it halfway plausible.
Dunkle has a good writing style, polished, quick and full of details. Even long conversations about the history of goblins are kept interesting. Whether it's a goblin chase on a dark night or a sunrise seen through a lake, she makes it come alive. And despite the grimness of the storyline, Dunkle keeps plenty of humor in the dialogue. ("You're just like that other King!" "No. I'm not green.")
Kate is an excellent heroine, with plenty of spirit and determination. Even though she starts off fearing Marak, she gradually comes to appreciate and love him. And Marak is an interesting combination of truthfulness and charm, as interesting as Kate. Supporting characters like elf-cat Seylin and Kate's sister Emily are also well-drawn.
"Hollow Kingdom" is a truly excellent fantasy, casting a new light on things that go bump in the night. A chilling, entrancing debut, and one that bodes well for Claire Dunkle.
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9 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
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Good Fantasy, October 24, 2003
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This is an excellent fantasy story that grabs your attention and makes you want to delve further into the world Mrs. Dunkle has created. It is much lighter than Tolkien but has a similar (and more "modern") feel. So for those who are big Middle-Earth fans and are willing to branch out slightly, this is familiar, comfortable ground-yet with some fresh concepts to explore. The only drawback I see is that now I DO want to find out what happens next! A problem for fantasy addicts who can't get enough...
This was one of those books that kept me up until two in the morning even knowing that I had to be at work the next day. Constantly wondering in what direction the next odd little twist would go, it kept me hooked until I finished the last page. And then I read it again.
This is not something I can guarantee for everyone. But if you are the type of person who enjoys fantasy, and are not too old at heart to pick up a book aimed at a more adolescent audience (I for one am also a Harry Potter fan) this is a good read.
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14 of 16 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Thoughts from a lover of Faeries stories, September 22, 2007
I was all geared up to really love this story. It had all of the fantasy-romantic elements that I've always liked. I surprised myself when I really didn't enjoy it.
I has nothing to do with the writing or with Ms. Dunkle's story-telling ability, which is considerable. I like the premise and the characters. I just found myself angry and incensed that there was nothing (LITERALLY) that Kate could do to prevent her marriage to Marak. Now, I promise I'm not about to go on some kind of feminist rant. I do have a reader's reason for disliking this book.
I suppose the best way to say it is that there was no challenge. When a heroine chooses to stay with the ugly, outcast or non-human suitor, that choice carries the most power when there's some leg room for her to move around. In other words, she doesn't HAVE to stay, she CHOOSES by her own free will to stay. The fact that Kate has absolutely no way out destroys the power of her choice. Her choice is made not by her but by the forces that surround her. I'm sorry, but I don't see anything romantic in that, or heroic. It was almost distracting. I found myself desperate for Kate to try to run away, to kick and scream, to swear at Marak like a drunken sailor, ANYTHING to show that she wasn't just some wilting flower who was going along with this because of some kind of Victorian sensibility. Nothing like that ever happened. All of a sudden, she's falling madly in love with Marak without having put up a fight or gone through some interesting internal struggle or anything like that.
I really like the idea of the story, but (and bear in mind this is just my personal preference) it would've been more interesting if it were set in the modern era with a modern heroine full of modern ideas of male-female relations (I'd be really interested to see what Holly Black would do with a plot like this). Kate's relationship with Marak could be so interesting if only she had an effective way to oppose him. Even the fact that she chose to go to Marak in exchange for him saving her sister isn't all that interesting because Marak had already made up his mind that he was going to kidnap her no matter what she did, and so her gesture falls flat in its attempted nobility. I gotta admit, to me the story was ultimately boring. I can see that most people love it, and like I said, it IS a good story. It just wasn't executed in a way that made it interesting to me. It made me unpleasantly agitated and as a result I didn't enjoy it.
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