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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
What the heck happened here?,
By Book Fan (Denver, Colorado USA) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Loch Ness Monsters in Atlantis? (Paperback)
Although Mr. Jason's first book, The Ultimate Dragon, was a bit on the superficial side (no real depth to the characters), the story moved along well and the book was readable.I cannot say the same about this one. It lurches along in the present tense, which IMHO is totally unsuitable for an action/adventure/fantasy novel. The text is rife with grammatical and spelling errors and the dialogue is stilted and silly -- not to mention questionable in other ways. In an early scene, the hero & heroine's teenage daughter, observing her parents making out, sighs, "Dad's caresses are so adept, so sensual..." I'm sure the author did not mean to imply an incestuous relationship, but still... This book reads as if written by a completely different person than the first one. Perhaps dyslexia is not the author's only problem.
0 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Go Nessie!,
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This review is from: Loch Ness Monsters in Atlantis? (Paperback)
As with his first book, Ultimate Dragon, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one. Jason's "theory" on Atlantis is very interesting. He's got a great imagination and his descriptive ability really conveys this to the reader. It's a good, clean, fun book to read. I recommend it to anyone who wants a book that is totally enjoyable and easy to read.
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Loch Ness Monsters in Atlantis? by Daniel Jason (Paperback - Nov. 2002)
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