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3.0 out of 5 stars
Cute, But Misses the Mark, April 2, 2002
This review is from: Lola Carlyle Reveals All (Mass Market Paperback)
Lola Carlyle contains all the expected elements of a good novel by Rachel Gibson - it's cute, funny and sexy. Despite the recipe for success, I was never completely drawn into the story. Lola is a lingerie model hiding out after being "over-exposed" in the National Enquirer. Max Zamora, a former Navy SEAL, secret agent on the run from a drug czar. He commandeers the boat Lola's snoozing on and much hilarity and sexy scenes ensue. The problem is, this book is NOT edited well (or at all). I'd just get drawn into the story and a glaring typo or leap of logic would jump off the page and distract me. For example, an exclusive neighbourhood becomes an elusive one, Max says "she was killed before she got to the hospital" and there's the mysterious dis/reappearing binoculars. I don't usually get bogged down in details, but the fact that I did, means I wasn't completely engaged by this book. Although it was interesting having this author set a book in the Caribbean, she does a better job with Idaho as her backdrop. Once Lola and Max become close, she demands he give up his life in black ops so he can be safe and secure with her. Well, that's nice, but she's just met the guy, he's complained about women demanding he quit his job in his past and here we go, Lola asks too. I thought her demands were a bit presumptious. I'd put Lola in the same category as "It Must Be Love", a good story with good characters, but somehow missing something. Here's hoping her next is in the same league as "True Confessions" or "Truly Madly Deeply".
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11 of 13 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Were We All Reading The Same Book?, April 25, 2002
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This review is from: Lola Carlyle Reveals All (Mass Market Paperback)
After finding out that her ex-fiance has posted her naked pictures on the internet, underwear model turned designer Lola Carlyle needs a vacation to escape the stress and embarassment. So she goes to the Bahamas with her dog, Baby Doll, and while she is sleeping on a friend's yacht it is comandeered by government agent, Max Zamora. After reading all the negative reviews, I almost didn't read this one but i'm glad I did. I did not think the heroine was stupid, and I did not think it at all unrealistic to freak out over some naked photos of her on the web. Those are pictures that someone she trusted took and she did not think they would become public. Underwear modeling is a little different than pictures becoming public that you absolutely did not want people to see. I thought Lola was a hilarious character with a quirkiness that makes her different from most heroines you read about. Lola Carlyle Reveals All is a funny, light-hearted romance that is right up there with all of this author's other books.
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11 of 13 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Less Than Gibson's Best, April 13, 2002
This review is from: Lola Carlyle Reveals All (Mass Market Paperback)
First, let me just say that I am a huge fan of Gibson's works. I've read and re-read everything she has done. So, naturally I was biting my nails waiting the release of this book. LOLA CARLYLE REVEALS ALL sets off at a fast pace, with gorgeous Lola contemplating how she was going to get even with her ex and Max, who was contemplating on how not to get killed. Max, an ex-Navy SEAL, commandeers a yacht after getting himself beat up, but unknown to him is that a sexy underwear model is aboard with her little dog. The two react to each other like oil and water at first, but then, slowly, they start to realize their attraction. The tension builds and they find themselves on an island running for their lives. What makes this book so disappointing to me is that Gibson's usually outrageous, off-beat heroine isn't present. Lola, though with flaws and a spunkiness of her own, falls short of Gibson's earlier heroines such as Gabrielle (IT MUST BE LOVE), Delaney (TRULY MADLY YOURS) or Hope (TRUE CONFESSIONS). Lola still struggles with her bulemia, is self conscious about her weight and those internet photos. I felt Lola was too staid to be a "Gibson Girl" and would much rather have had Gabrielle out there with Max, even if only to channel the bad energy away from him. As it was, Max was a tough, loner ex-SEAL, bent on a mission and made himself pretty clear as to what he wanted and didn't want in life. I found it too convenient that he gave up his job and wanted children - a turn around from his earlier testimonial. I think if Gibson had them spend less pages on the yacht, more in depth emotional entanglement, that particular about face might have been plausible. The other thing I found lacking in LOLA was the absence of great secondary characters. Besides BD - the loveable little dog, there were no zany, funny, weird or even interesting secondary characters to speak of. More of a plot driven romance than character driven, the predictibility of LOLA leaves this reader less than satisfied. For those of you who've not read Gibson before, you might not find anything lacking in this romance. For the rest of us, it is less than her best.
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