6 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Long on atmosphere, February 13, 2008
This review is from: The Lost Luggage Porter: A Jim Stringer Mystery (Jim Stringer Mysteries) (Paperback)
_The Lost Luggage Porter_ would be more accurately described as "suspense" than "mystery," strictly speaking. As suspense, it's not bad. But it's not for everyone.
The best things about the book are its terrific historical research, its wonderful sense of place, and its brooding and fascinating atmosphere. Martin has not only done his homework, he has a tremendous eye for historical detail. The book would make a good movie on that basis alone; the "you are there" sense goes a long way towards establishing tension.
Tension is also established by a pretty good sense of pacing. Our hero is forced out of his comfort zone quickly, always a good thing. Forces stronger than he is loom inexorably. Stuff happens, and it leaves you anticipating the next stuff to happen.
The thing is, though, that a lot of the stuff that happens isn't (in the end) very relevant. The plotting here is ... well, I'll be generous and dub it "adequate". Jim, our hero, does nothing--literally *nothing*--on his own initiative until page 244. He tags meekly along, doing what he's told by a variety of secondary characters. And after his one brief burst of competence, he sinks back into inertness for the rest of the book.
Nor are the events Jim somnambulates through especially compelling. The criminals' plot is quotidian and unimaginative. There are no surprises, nothing unexpected. There are a number of severe anticlimaxes, particularly the one Jim heroically defeats the villainous menacing thugs because *they don't bother to show up*.
And the only way that Martin can find to establish tension leading up to that point is to rely on the character being too stupid to think of using a telephone, or telegraph, for some hours. That's a sign of a book that's escaped its author's control.
The characterization is fair. It's first-person narration, so the character whom we see most of is Jim Stringer himself. Jim has enough different sides to his personality to be interesting, although his thwarted desire to be an engine driver is laid on a bit thick. Most of the other characters, particularly "the wife", get short shrift.
Me, I'm a train nut, so I liked the book on that basis alone. If you like trains, particularly English railways in the age of steam, you'll have a hard time disliking _The Lost Luggage Porter_. If you like suspense, particularly suspense where the hero is constantly at the mercy of events outside his control, you'll probably like it as well. If you have a good visual imagination, that's another plus.
All the same, Andrew Martin could write much better books than this if he combined his impeccable research and descriptive gifts with attention to the dull, straitlaced, nuts-and-bolts, unromantic techniques--the *craft*, in other words--of storytelling.
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5 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Another great Jim Stringer mystery, January 18, 2008
This review is from: The Lost Luggage Porter: A Jim Stringer Mystery (Jim Stringer Mysteries) (Paperback)
The beauty of this series lies in the writing, and, as I am not usually a fan of mysteries, the strongly drawn characters and descriptions of early 20th century England warrant my continuing interest in it. Jim is now officially a member of the railway detectives, and the book takes on a picaresque turn as he is lead through the streets of York and then on to Paris. I can only find fault with one thing, and that is the rather sketchily drawn character of Jim's wife. She occupies only a brief part of the book, that is true, but in a book with so many good characters, it is odd that she comes off merely as an afterthought. Still, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next Andrew Martin book later this year.
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4.0 out of 5 stars
"I had lost my job on the footplate, joined a criminal band, and was about to become a father...all too bloody drastic.", March 23, 2008
This review is from: The Lost Luggage Porter: A Jim Stringer Mystery (Jim Stringer Mysteries) (Paperback)
James Harrison Stringer, now working as a detective for the North Eastern Company Railroad in York, England, has been fired from the job he's loved--being "on the footplate" of a locomotive. He had wrecked a locomotive and its shed because someone else failed to warm up the brakes. Though he still has a chance to work at the terminal and watch the various lines as they operate, the 23-year-old Stringer still sees the railroads as a world in which the power, movement, and downright excitement of being in a locomotive cab will never die.
When a hotel porter at the Station Hotel in York is found with his throat cut, and soon afterward the Cameron brothers, "Brilliantine" and "Crackpot," whom Stringer has encountered in a snooker parlor, are shot to death near the York goods yard, the seemingly quiet life off the footplate suddenly ratchets up. Stringer goes undercover to trace the "bad lads" and those masterminds putting them up to crime. Wearing an old suit and a pair of spectacles from which he has removed the lenses, Stringer believes that no one will recognize him from his former jobs on the railroad. (Oddly, he also believes that a pair of glasses with no lenses will fool everyone into thinking they are real.)
He insinuates himself into a gang run by Valentine Sampson and Miles Hopkins, and each night returns home to his loving wife Lydia, who types up his reports for Weatherill. Lydia, a suffragist, pregnant with their first baby, due in a month, does not look forward to motherhood. Stringer's discovery that the gang plans to rob a safe containing the wages of railroad men who have been out on strike leads to additional complications when the use of acetylene torches creates emergencies.
Martin creates a broad panorama of York life in 1906, concentrating on life in the railways as they dominate the life of the community. The 23-year-old Stringer, while not fully realized, is still a character with whom the reader will develop sympathy. The slang of the railroad and of the period may be disconcerting for readers initially, but as the story develops, the unfamiliar language becomes less of a problem and adds significantly to the atmosphere. Filled with local color, Lost Luggage Porter provides a fascinating glimpse of life in 1906 as the railroads become the link to the future. The story creates an indelible portrait of ordinary existence and its values--a must for any railroad buff! n Mary Whipple
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