From School Library Journal
Grade 9 Up—Marisol Guzman, 18, puts off enrolling at Stamford for a year so she can write a novel. She gets a job at a local coffee shop and signs up for a writing course through the Cambridge Center for Adult Education. Olivia, the instructor, is strikingly beautiful, a number of years older, and appears to have the knowledge and skills to teach the class. Looks can be deceiving, however, and Marisol learns this truth the hard way when she becomes involved in her first real sexual relationship. Her former buddy, Gio, whose romantic feelings for Marisol were thwarted because she is a lesbian, coincidentally registers for the same class and their friendship is restored. Marisol's friend and apartment mate, Birdie; his new love, Damon; and Gio realize early on that Olivia is pushy, inconsiderate, and manipulative, but Marisol doesn't listen. Wittlinger's companion to
Hard Love (S & S, 1999) effectively continues the story from Marisol's point of view. Characters are well drawn and believable, and the interpersonal relationships realistic. Along with her friends, readers can see early on that Marisol's relationship with "the teacher" is courting disaster. Witnessing Olivia's jealousy and mistreatment and wishing Marisol would finally open her eyes creates effective page-turning tension. Although everything falls apart and it is too late to fix things, there is a note of hope at the end that cries out for yet another installment of this compelling story.—
Diane P. Tuccillo, Fort Collins Regional Library District, CO Copyright © Reed Business Information, a division of Reed Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved.
From Booklist
In this companion title, which comes nine years after Printz Honor Book Hard Love (1999), Marisol takes center stage after playing a critical and exceptionally drawn supporting character in Gio’s story. Beginning a handful of months after Hard Love ends, the story opens with Marisol’s decision to defer entry to Stanford for a year to focus on her writing and, hopefully, to find love. She rents an apartment, takes a waitressing job, and enrolls in a novel-writing class. At work, she meets Lee, a lesbian teen estranged from her midwestern family. In her writing class, she meets beautiful teacher Olivia Frost, and she also reconnects with Gio. As she navigates a new friendship, a powerful teacher-student romance, and a damaged relationship with Gio, Marisol takes a number of wrong turns and has to live with the consequences. The plot, which stretches plausibility, may not compare favorably with Hard Love’s sophisticated crafting, but this solid entry into the small but growing canon of GLBTQ fiction for teens will engage readers. Grades 10-12. --Holly Koelling
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