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I wanted to see one more act, March 19, 2005
This review is from: Lucky (Paperback)
Eddie De Oliveira is an extremely talented young writer. Seeing that he was born in 1979 was rather humbling. With another book to be released in August 2005, he has overcome what we in the writing industry call "resistance", and is a true professional, practicing his vocation - as opposed to an amateur who plays around with his avocation.
The description of the relationship between Sam and Toby - and HIM - is extremely realistic and tangible. It was difficult not to pity Sam as he found his attractions for Toby growing exponentially, although Toby remained distant. And then when Toby met Lucy, a girl that Sam saw first and fancied, although Toby approached her and hit her up, Sam's and Toby's relationship went into a tailspin.
Oliveira did an excellent job getting directly into Sam's head with regard to his fears, concerns and conflicts regarding sexuality. Am I straight - I *am* attracted to girls. Am I gay - I *am* attracted to guys. Am I bisexual - I *am* attracted to boys and girls. Sam actually searched the dictionary to try to find the right word to describe what he felt, and ultimately decided that he couldn't label himself. I've always referred to that as: you love who you love. If you love a girl, you love a girl. If you love a guy, you love a guy.
I felt there was a little too much rumination and focus on soccer, as opposed to direct action - such as dialogue, interaction between characters, etc. While the latter certainly existed, it seemed that rumination captured the majority. I also felt that his declaration of his sexuality came at a very strange time, and I was completely taken by surprise. That said, "coming out", whether as a bisexual, trisexual, whatever - sometimes just happens as it happens, and there is no real reason behind why or when.
However, I thought there was a third act that was missing here, and that would be Sam's interaction with HIM, the guy he had been casually eyeing and flirting with at soccer games. I understand that we our own imagination could fill the blanks for us, but after declaring a label-less bisexuality, his first romance with a guy would have introduced an entirely new element, and one that I think we should have seen. My recommendation would have been less rumination, and a final act with HIM.
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A Book For Older Teens, June 21, 2005
This review is from: Lucky (Paperback)
Lucky is a story that describes how cruel people can be. The author tells us how he thinks we should deal with such cruelty. This is a young adult novel that shows us love has no labels. It is easy for teens to relate to what the author is saying. I would not recommend this book to children, but to very mature teenagers. It would be a little hard to understand being a younger child. This book is easy for teens to relate to what the author is saying. It is an interesting, well written book that tells teenagers to look past labels and find the true personality of a person. Although a young adult novel, it demands that the readers have a mature outlook on life. The story offers a means of opening discussions with teens about sexuality.
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lucky bye eddie de oliveira, June 8, 2004
A Kid's Review
Ever wonder if you wern't straight? Sam did. All his life he had a funny feeling he wasn't like everyone else and that he might be bisexual. He had been scared for so long to tell anyone about his "confused gut" until he met a bisexual named Toby. Toby and him started to get close as friends because they could share their problems. Sam also feels feelings for Toby and he starts to realize he may like him more than a friend.
Everything was going great with them until Toby met a girl named Lucy and they started dating. When this happens , Sam realizes that he really does want Toby more than a friend and that he probably should talk to him. will he get the courage to talk to his "close friend?" Will he ever figure out his "confused gut?" I would recommend this book to anyone who likes a good dramatic book and i would totally read this book again. *ashley*
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