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3.0 out of 5 stars
Got old fast, February 16, 2005
The major problem that I had with this book is that Jenna's daughter Meriel, whose point of view makes up a majority of the book, parallels way too close to her mother. She rejects her future, runs around getting into misadventures, falls in love with a guy she isn't attracted to in the beginning, gets into battle, and then her title gets elevated. Sure, there are enough differences for the author to get away with this I guess, but the predictability just ruined it for me. On the plus side, the action did keep me reading. Maybe there was a little part of me that thought I wouldn't be able to figure out what happened, but halfway through the book I realized that wasn't going to happen, and at that point I had to finish reading anyway. I got even more frustrated when Farrel turned Jenna into a flat character, putting all his effort into Jenna (which was pointless, considering they're very much alike). I just spent 500 pages in the previous book getting to know Jenna, and now she's just, well, blegh. Very disappointed. The last few chapters are quick-moving considering the amount of action. However, I wouldn't say they were engrossing; they kept my interest up enough to turn the page. All in all I was pretty disappointed in this second book. Holder of Lightning wasn't superb, but I had wanted to continue reading the series. Unfortunately, it was just way too similar to the previous one for me to give a good rating, and I felt there was a lot of room for improvement.
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2 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Tremendous fantasy, January 7, 2004
Jenna's enemies still lurk and are planning the abduction of Jenna's precious daughter Meriel by her Uncle Doyle, whose vow to do no harm to his half-sister ended when their mom died. Meriel's uncle is obsessed with obtaining the Lamh Shabbala stone that channels all magic. If it means the death of his niece and anyone else so that he gains full power, so be it as he believes he was the one not Jenna who should have been the First Holder. Jenna is stunned as she loves her daughter but fears the price of acceding to the demands of her sibling as there are no guarantees that Meriel will live or that the peace will hold. She also worries about those loyal to her for she remembers what happened to her beloved. The second book in the "Cloudmages" series, MAGE OF CLOUDS, is a tremendous fantasy due to the dilemma confronting the heroine of the first book. Though the story line focuses much on Meriel's plight, Jenna is the key ingredient as she struggles between the bigger good and her own micro need; either way someone will be hurt by her decision. Meriel is a solid character while her uncle is delightfully villainous. Fans of the first book, the author (in his variety of writing aliases), and fantasy aficionados will greatly value this powerful book that ignores the middle syndrome with a powerful plot and deep cast. Harriet Klausner
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3.0 out of 5 stars
A repeat of the first novel, February 19, 2011
The first novel wasn't the best I had ever read, but it was interesting, and I enjoyed reading it. However, this one is just the same novel all over again, only inserting Meriel as Jenna. Yes, she isn't quiet as crazy, but it is similar enough to make you scratch your head, especially when the same key elements happen to her as her mother. Seriously, they would name her Ard?? Hard to believe. Also, it seems like everyone in the novel nonstop blames Jenna for the disaster at the end, yet, in reality it was all Doyle's fault. If he hadn't kidnapped Meriel in the first place, and then gone back on his word a second time, and tried to take Jenna's cloch, all of the death and war would have been avoided. Yet, everyone seems to forget that. Also, I don't understand why everyone always has to die. I can understand a few, but just like with Jenna, every single person almost that Meriel gets close with dies...
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