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So it's understandable that David L. Carroll called his book A Manual of Writer's Tricks. There are tricks here--what to do when you're stuck, how to write about dry subjects, how to find authentic period words, how to improve your opening (try cutting your first page altogether, Carroll advises, as it's often the victim of "stage fright"). Carroll's quotations by other writers spruce up his text smartly. There is probably plenty of information in this book that would be of use to the beginning writer. But it is all so haphazardly and superficially presented that one could hardly deem it, as the book's subtitle purports, "essential advice." And some of the recommendations, such as avoiding "frequent repetition of a character's name by varying names and descriptions," seem outright wrong. Even more, one wishes Carroll had taken his own advice and trimmed some of the excess verbiage off this already slim volume. It's hard to trust a writer who hasn't made sure that he himself has homed in on (not, horrors, as he writes here, "honed in on") all the right words. Jane Steinberg
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9 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
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If you write, here's an inexpensive secret weapon,
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This review is from: A Manual of Writer's Tricks: Essential Advice for Fiction and Nonfiction Writers (Paperback)
This one's for everyone - fiction and non-fiction. You pick up this slim paperback, rifle the pages and bang! A Manual of Writer's Tricks gives you ammunition to instantly liven your writing. My copy is well-highlighted. The foreword is written by literary agent Sheree Bykofsky who once sent me a delightful rejection letter. Some examples (I just gave you one - irony); Show don't tell - instead of "the ship was heavily weighted," say "Excess cargo made her tilt slightly to port." Use words that evoke images - instead of "my back is sore all over," say "I ache along every nerve ending and vertebra of my spine." You get the picture, now go get the book.
6 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
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Page after page of practical, useful advice,
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Like the other reviewers of this book I was amazed by this collection of writing tips. The book is loaded with two to four paragraph recommendations on topics including style, structure, colorful writing, revision, writing exercises, word choice. Ample exercises are given where appropriate. This book is easy to read and you feel that the author is right there sitting next to you as you read the book. He's gently giving you tips on improving your writing, unlike the tough commands of Strunk and White. I would like to list all of the items that I found interesting and useful, but there would be too many. So, here's one that I just turned to: "Always include some type of conflict... It's a not-so-well-kept secret among writers that the principle of conflict and resolution, so dear to the novelist's heart, applies just as successfuly to exposition and non-ficton as it does to fiction, even the most theoretical and academic kinds." He then goes on to list eleven ways to include conflict in your non-fiction. He also describes some examples using conflict. I highly recommend this book, it is one of my favorites on writing. John Dunbar
5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
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For what it is, extremely well done,
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This book is page after page of distilled advice on writing. No amusing anecdotes. No inspirational thoughts. These suggestions could be found in more verbose books, but as a quick reference this one is hard to beat.
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