Master's Thief [Kindle Edition]

Nicole Austin (Author)

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Product Description

A mere servant’s daughter, Jamillah is forbidden to love Prince Zahir. They’ve been kept apart since their childhood bond was discovered. Painfully aware of the consequences, Jamillah shamefully resorts to stealing to ensure her survival. When she is caught in the act, it’s Prince Zahir’s duty to administer punishment for her crime.Zahir will not take his pretty desert rose’s hands. He will take all of her—master his naughty sex slave, thief of his heart.

Product Details

• Format: Kindle Edition
• File Size: 101 KB
• Print Length: 12 pages
• Publisher: Ellora's Cave (July 13, 2009)
• Sold by: Amazon Digital Services
• Language: English
• ASIN: B003SX0XZI
• Text-to-Speech: Enabled
• Lending: Enabled
• Average Customer Review: 2.6 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (14 customer reviews)
• Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,821 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)

More About the Author

Nicole Austin lives on the sheltered Gulf Coast of Florida, where inspiration can be found sitting under a big shade umbrella on the beach, sipping cold margaritas. A voracious reader, she never goes anywhere without a book, but started looking for something more. Something hotter.

A passion for erotic romance led to Nicole's creation of sizzling characters and boundary pushing stories. Now she lives in an incredible world where fantasy comes to life in bold, vivid detail. Well, until real life intrudes and she has to share the computer with the rest of the family.

Customer Reviews

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19 of 21 people found the following review helpful:

2.0 out of 5 stars Adolescent romantic/sexual fantasy, July 4, 2010

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Chelsea S. Lewis - See all my reviews
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This review is from: Master's Thief (Kindle Edition)

This is a faithful, irony-free transcription of the sort of sexual fantasy one often sees parodied, or at least made a bit more emotionally complex, in these postmodern, metatextual days. Jamilah's all "Master, forgive me for my crime!" and Zahir's all "hah, I caught you, and now I shall 'punish' you by having sex with you while you are totally helpless to resist and are kind of making a token resistance but we both know this is really what you want isn't it my little desert flower." Kind of seventeenth-century as exotic sexual fantasies go, but whatever floats your boat. It's written in fairly grammatical English, though the highfalutin' Arabian-played-by-Anne-Baxter-speak ("Daughter of your most humble servant") doesn't always mesh well with random bits of modern slang and sex talk.

2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:

3.0 out of 5 stars Had a little bit of potential, April 28, 2011

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beachbaby (Florida USA) - See all my reviews

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A little bit of dominance and a little bit of sex. A very quick read (15-20 minutes). Hey - but what do you expect for free?

1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:

1.0 out of 5 stars Crappy writing, crappy storyline, August 30, 2011

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Wintermask "No such thing as "too many dr... (Sacramento, CA) - See all my reviews

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Good thing this was a Kindle freebie! This short is of the "Arabian nights" type, which seems to have been popularized by the first "Mummy" movie and Disney's "Aladdin." The characters are stereotyped and awkward. The erotic scenes aren't particularly steamy. The premise is ridiculous - if the prince had wanted the destitute girl, he could have had her at any time. It doesn't make that much sense that he has been pining for her.