Message from Pluto is funny and satirical and I smiled all the way through it. I found it to be well written and I look forward to reading more. It has nice character choices, funny dialogue, and doesn't take anything seriously.
Pluto sends an angry message to Earth about its displeasure at being removed from the League of Planets and the earthlings pretty much freak out about it. Then they calm down and get back normal. Which in this particular story, isn't all that normal. Are the Plutonians serious or is this all a hoax? Read it to find out.
Here is an excerpt of one of the conversations I thought was funny. I don't know why, but just go with it.
"Come on, how am I supposed to eat when your ugly haircut is attacking my keen sense of fashion, because this," Doug pointed at Donny's head with his knife. "This is not working."
"Don't be ridiculous, if there was a contest, my hair would destroy you."
You said that if people like it and it gets good ratings, there would be more. Five stars from me Adam. More? Yes please.