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The Millionaire and the Cowgirl (Fortune's Children)

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We are introduced to Kyle in the first of the Fortune's Children series Hired Husband. We learn that Kyle is a millionaire playboy. In this book, Kyle learns that his grandmother Kate has left him a ranch in Wyoming, but for him to inherit it he must live there for at least six months. Kate and all her wisdom knew that ten years ago Kyle had a summer romance with Samantha Rawlings, neighbor of the Wyoming ranch. Kate also knew that Sam's daughter was Kyle's. So, match-making from "beyond the grave" she makes sure that Kyle is put into a position that he is sure to find out about his daughter. How Kyle and Sam handle the situation is beyond Kate's control.

I am starting to see how the series will unfold and I am not only enjoying it, but I can't wait for the next one.

This book started out really good. Well written and a great story line. Unfortunately, a little more then halfway through it started to die. I guess what got to me the most was the repetitiveness of the characters thoughts. Even more so, another pet peeve of mine is constantly switching POV's, and especially without any warning! In the end, it did finally pick up, again. It was good enough that I was able to get through it, though in my opinion it could have been much better. I have read at least one other book by this author and enjoyed it, so I know the potential is there, and hey, we all can have a bad day, so to speak.