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27 of 28 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
A first novel,
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This review is from: The Mineral Palace (Hardcover)
Heidi Julavits is clearly a talented writer who will, I feel, in the future write a great novel. But "The Mineral Palace" isn't it. "The Mineral Palace" is a good novel, but it is overlong and crowded with too many figures and forebodings that drown out a potentially effective ending. The novel starts out promisingly enough with a scene straight from a Kurosawa film: a dog trotting along with a prosthetic arm in its mouth. Bena, the main figure in the novel, looks warily at the dog, while constantly doing computations regarding fate -- an effective device that is later dropped at about the halfway point of the novel. Bena is a fascinating and complex character, with her guilts and desires, playing themselves out on the devasted moonscape of Pueblo Colorado, circa 1934. Julavets spends a great deal of time developing her. And she largely succeeeds. Where the author fails, is in the sheer accumulation of grotesque figures populating the novel. There is a rich one-legged woman thumping around on an elephant tusk; a fated prostitute who does litte more than shriek throughout the novel; two feed store clerks straight out of "Deliverance"; an unbelievable heart-of-gold Sam Elliot like cowboy, who never grows beyond the Marlboro Man, etc. None of these figures are bad in themselves, but only half were probably needed (along with about a 100 less pages). On the other hand there is a wonderful evil figure in Horace Gast, who is central, and one I wish Julavits had of spent even more time exploring his various dark corners along with his relationship the town. Up to about the halfway point of the novel I was ready to give this 4 or more stars. But the novel seemed to lose much of its energy after this. Revelations such as infaticide, suicide, and incest, lacked the kind of wallop they should of had on the reader. It seems to me that Julavits, with her remorseless universe, was going for Aeschylus via Thomas Hardy (or perhaps better: William Faulkner). Still, this is a novel worth reading. Like Faulkner, Julavits delivers chapters that can stand alone as stories. Two, "The Stolen Pillbox" (where Bena meets an on-the-run Bonnie Parker), and "Buffalo Mass Suicide" are fine examples of a short story writer showing her strength. "The Mineral Palace" is, at 300 pages, an ambitious novel. I hope Julavits' next novel is more pared back. But I also look forward to it.
17 of 18 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Yaddo, Yaddo, Yaddo,
By A Customer
This review is from: The Mineral Palace (Nova Audio Books) (Audio Cassette)
I almost used the title: How many gratuitous dead babies does it take to make a bestseller? Offensive? Yes. But not entirely inaccurate. This is not your "feel good summer beach read."This is the kind of book that comes out of writers' workshops. Overwrought and over-long with symbolism overwhelming story at every turn of page. Mineral Palace is bleak and tedious. Too many plot points end up being pointless. And how do such cardboard characters withstand such raging duststorms? As a work of fiction, I don't care whether this is an accurate depiction of Pueblo in the 30s. I do care that I was lured into this town with the promise of a good story and left with just a few stunning images (The Buffalo Mass Suicide).
15 of 16 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
A contrived tale signifying nothing,
By Anne (Canada) - See all my reviews
This review is from: The Mineral Palace (Paperback)
From the opening pages of Heidi Julavits's "The Mineral Palace", doom hangs over the Jonssen family. It makes its first appearance when a crow hits the windshield of their car as they journey from St. Paul, Minnesota to a new life in Pueblo, Colorado. It lingers like an oppressive force throughout the body of the novel and by the final chapter only the most obtuse reader could fail to see what it portends.Bena Jonssen is a young mother who slowly comes to the realization that her newborn son is not "right". Dissatisfied with her life (a faithless husband, a college education wasted on marriage, an unwanted move to the dustbowl of 1934 Colorado) Bena spends a lot time blaming blind cosmic forces for her own misfortunes and the grim ugliness of the world she sees around her. In fact, Bena seems capable of seeing only the ugliness and the meaninglessness of her world. Julavits writes quite well in a mechanical sense but her characters lack soul and the overall effect she creates is contrived. As a reader, it's very hard to feel much of anything for Bena, whose emotions are as distant and cold as the rocks housed in Pueblo's decrepit "Mineral Palace". Julavits has no particular feel for the time period or the place where she sets her story. Indeed, one wonders why she chose them. Without the clutter of stereotypical Western images with which Julavits decorates the novel (like the mysterious cowboy "Red" who eats his sausage by cutting slices off with his pocket knife), the reader would lose all but the most generic sense of time or place. Julavits has a penchant for the bizarre (like the rich widow whose prosthetic leg is made of elephant tusk) which makes her version of the 1930s read like the script for a David Lynch film. The unrelenting bleakness of Bena's vision seems forced and inauthentic. Julavits is making a point here -- but in the soulless vacuum of her Pueblo it comes across as pointless as the lives of the characters she's created. "The Mineral Palace" is not without its redeeming qualities. The sleight of hand Julavits plays in the first chapter, where the legendary Bonnie and Clyde's final fated road trip briefly intersects Bena and Ted Jonssen's journey to Pueblo, is pulled off with style and ease. Julavits's writing sometimes has a cinematic quality, such that one can imagine it more successfully achieved on the big screen than on the printed page. Overall, however, I would not recommend this book.
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